Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, parallel structure).

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, talking with them helps me improve my communication skills and build stronger relationships, and it usually makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: Give a clear, relevant topic sentence and explain with specific, coherent details. Use simple vocabulary correctly and avoid unclear phrases. Organize ideas with linking words (e.g., because, so, for example).

例: We usually chat about school life and relationships. For example, because many students are single at my school, we often gossip about who likes whom and share news about classmates.

提案: Answer directly and give a concise reason with a clear example. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to connect the preference and the reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer chatting in groups because I can hear different opinions. For instance, in a WhatsApp group after class we discuss ideas from many classmates, which helps me learn new perspectives.

提案: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (pronouns, articles) and avoid repeating words. Use natural expressions like "see their reactions" or "feel more comfortable."

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' facial expressions and immediate reactions, which makes conversations feel more natural and comfortable.

提案: Be honest but precise. Use one clear topic sentence and explain why with specific details and a linking word. Improve grammar (tense, articles) and choose more appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "honest feedback" instead of "actual things").

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially my close friends, because if I give honest feedback they can feel upset. However, we usually resolve disagreements by talking things through afterwards.

× I really like chatting with my friends because it has many benefits such as improving my communication skills and makes many friends, and it makes me feel happy and comfortable.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends because it has many benefits such as improving my communication skills, helping me make many friends, and making me feel happy and comfortable.

Pronoun/reference and parallel structure problem: 'it' is used incorrectly to refer to 'chatting with my friends' and the verbs in the list are not parallel. Use a clear subject ('it' can remain but verbs must be parallel) or rephrase: 'has many benefits such as improving..., helping..., and making...'. This keeps the same grammatical subject and consistent verb forms. Suggestion: keep parallel gerund phrases after 'such as' and ensure pronoun refers clearly to the activity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× My school is only guard school, therefore they don't really have much have some boyfriends or girlfriends so therefore they really like to rumor someone's love someone's low months.

✓ My school is an all-boys school, so they don't really have many boyfriends or girlfriends; therefore, they often like to spread rumors about someone's love life.

Multiple errors: article and noun choice ('only guard school' unclear) and plural/quantifier issues and verb/word choice and sentence structure. 'an all-boys school' correctly identifies the school type (article + adjective-noun), 'many' is the correct quantifier for countable nouns, and 'spread rumors about someone's love life' is the natural collocation. Also combine clauses with correct connectors and punctuation. Suggestion: identify correct school type and use standard expressions like 'spread rumors' and 'love life'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I prefer to chat WhatsApp group or people because I have one lessons and because I acquire some new perspectives of perspective if I talked with many people and I can have some.

✓ I prefer chatting in a WhatsApp group or with several people because I have one lesson and I can gain new perspectives if I talk with many people.

Preposition and verb form issues: use 'chatting in a WhatsApp group' or 'chat with people'. 'have one lessons' has number agreement and article errors: use 'one lesson' or better context 'after one lesson' if intended. Tense consistency: use present simple 'talk' for habitual actions, not past 'talked'. Remove redundant words like 'perspectives of perspective' and use 'gain new perspectives'. Suggestion: ensure correct prepositions ('in' for group), singular/plural agreement, and consistent verb tense for habits. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I think it prefer to communicate face to face because face I can see my friends face and I can see their reactions, actual reacts reaction and I can feel comfortable.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friends' faces, observe their reactions, and feel comfortable.

Pronoun and subject-verb agreement: 'it prefer' is incorrect; the speaker should say 'I prefer'. Redundant and incorrect phrases like 'face I can see my friends face' should be simplified to 'I can see my friends' faces'. Use correct possessive 'friends'' and correct noun forms 'reactions'. Remove redundant words ('actual reacts reaction'). Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for personal preference, hyphenate 'face-to-face', use plural possessive for friends and concise phrasing. Grammar_problem_type_id:2

× I always argue with my friends, especially my best friends because if I told some actual things the my friends became angry and mad at me.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends, especially my best friends, because if I say certain true things, my friends become angry with me.

Tense and article/pronoun errors: 'I always argue' may be exaggerated; 'sometimes' fits better or keep 'always' if intended. 'If I told' mixes past with general truth; use present simple 'if I say' for habitual conditional. 'some actual things' is unnatural — use 'certain true things' or 'honest things'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'my friends'. Use 'become angry with me' rather than 'became angry and mad at me' for consistency. Suggestion: use present simple in conditional sentences about habitual actions, choose natural collocations like 'say true things' and correct article usage. Grammar_problem_type_id:5