Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your response more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., "these days" instead of "now the time").

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. Nowadays we often use apps like WhatsApp, which makes keeping in touch very easy, and chatting usually brightens my mood because I can share funny stories or get advice when I need it.

提案: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then list 2–3 typical topics with linking words and a specific example. Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like "outside the situation."

例: I usually chat about either school or leisure activities. For example, we often discuss homework and exams, but we also plan outings or share funny videos when we are free.

提案: Give a clear preference and justify it with concise reasons, using linking words to contrast preferences. Reduce repetition and finish your sentences with a concrete example.

例: I generally prefer chatting in a group because it’s lively and we can make plans together. However, I sometimes prefer one-on-one conversations when I need to discuss something personal or get honest advice from a close friend.

提案: State your preference clearly, give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words, and avoid unclear phrases like "imagine your word in an active way." Use natural expressions such as "misinterpret messages online."

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it’s easier to read body language and avoid misunderstandings. In contrast, messages on social media are often misinterpreted because tone and facial expressions are missing.

提案: Be careful with sensitive topics: answer briefly, state typical causes of disagreements, and give a specific, respectful example without unclear or potentially offensive phrasing. Use linking words to explain how you resolve arguments.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue about study methods or beliefs, but we usually calm down and discuss our differences. For example, last month a friend and I disagreed about religion; after talking respectfully and listening to each other, we agreed to respect our different views.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because now the time there is a technology time and we just interact with each other through the WhatsApp and mobile. So yes I like very much when I chat with my friend because it makes me my mood fresh and just.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because now is the age of technology and we interact with each other through WhatsApp and mobile phones. I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it refreshes my mood.

Errors: awkward present-tense phrasing and incorrect word choices ('now the time there is a technology time', 'the WhatsApp and mobile', 'it makes me my mood fresh'). Correction uses natural present tense and common collocations: 'the age of technology', 'through WhatsApp and mobile phones', 'refreshes my mood'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and prefer standard collocations.

× Uh, I usually chat with my friends about to, to my sometime to my education related and sometime, uh, uh, fun, fun related when we are going to the outside and then just related to the outside, uh, outside the situation. So it's depend on the situation, but sometime I just share with my own ideas and.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my education at times and sometimes about fun topics, especially when we are going out. It depends on the situation, but sometimes I just share my own ideas.

Errors: incorrect prepositions and particles ('about to, to my', 'education related', 'going to the outside', 'it's depend on'). Corrections: use 'about my education', 'sometimes about fun topics', 'when we are going out', 'it depends on'. Suggestion: use 'about' for topics, 'go out' for leaving home, and conjugate verbs correctly ('depends').

× Well I prefer to chat with a group of people because when I chat with a a group then there is many of people and we can easily interact with each other. But sometime I just want to chat with the only one friend because I I just trust on on my 1 friend and I I share with her my own my.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because when I chat with a group there are many people and we can easily interact with each other. But sometimes I want to chat with just one friend because I trust one friend and I share my thoughts with her.

Errors: singular/plural mismatches ('a group then there is many of people', 'the only one friend', 'sometime'). Corrections: 'there are many people', 'just one friend', 'sometimes'. Also remove redundant words and fix 'trust on' to 'trust'. Suggestion: ensure subject and noun forms match (use 'are' with plural 'people') and use 'trust someone' without 'on'.

× How well I prefer her to communicate face to face because I believe that when you communicate to the face to face, then you can easily interact with each other. Because I can see that in the with the social media, some people are just imagine your word in an active way. So I prefer to communicate physically.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I believe that when you communicate face to face, you can interact more easily. On social media, some people misinterpret your words, so I prefer physical communication.

Errors: incorrect pronouns and prepositions ('How well I prefer her to', 'communicate to the face to face', 'in the with the social media', 'imagine your word in an active way'). Corrections: use 'I prefer to communicate face to face', 'on social media', 'misinterpret your words', and 'physical communication'. Suggestion: use 'on' with 'social media' and avoid extra articles; use 'misinterpret' for misunderstanding written text.

× Uh, yes, I argue with friends sometime on the education and sometime on the religious. I remember that for example, last month I, I, I was argue with with my friend on the religious because she was Asia and I, I am a, a Sunni. So we, we just are to be her. And she said that she she is wrong.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends sometimes about education and sometimes about religion. For example, last month I argued with my friend about religion because she was Shia and I am Sunni. We just discussed it, and she later said that she was wrong.

Errors: incorrect verb tense and forms ('I was argue' should be 'I argued'), wrong nouns ('the religious' should be 'religion'), nationality/religion word misuse ('Asia' should be 'Shia'), and unclear phrasing ('we just are to be her'). Corrections use simple past 'argued' for a specific past event, 'about religion', and clearer phrasing 'We just discussed it'. Suggestion: use past tense for completed past actions and choose correct terms for religious groups ('Shia', 'Sunni').