Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật từ, tránh lặp từ và phát âm từ không chính xác; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: dùng "I enjoy chatting with my friends." thay vì "I yes I enjoy..."; nói rõ nội dung chia sẻ (kể chuyện, video hài), và giới hạn độ dài dưới 5 câu.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually tell each other personal stories and share funny videos. It helps us stay connected and relaxed.

提案: Cải thiện tính rõ ràng và tính mạch lạc: trình bày câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "study and future plans" thay cho "study on our land plans"); cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại bài tập, kì thi).

例: I usually talk with my friends about our studies and future plans. For instance, we discuss homework, upcoming exams and possible university choices, and we also gossip a little about people we’ve recently met.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp: dùng "I prefer chatting with one friend" và giải thích rõ lý do bằng cách dùng cụm từ chính xác (ví dụ "more private and deeper conversations"); tránh các cụm không rõ như "ensure arrived cover."

例: I prefer chatting with one friend, especially my best friend, because conversations feel more private and we can talk more deeply without worrying about information leaking.

提案: Sửa động từ chủ động và trật tự từ: dùng "I prefer communicating via social media"; loại bỏ lặp từ và nói rõ lí do cụ thể (ví dụ tiện lợi, emoji làm câu chuyện thú vị).

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it’s convenient and apps let us use emojis and stickers, which make conversations more expressive and fun.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, dùng thì và cấu trúc chính xác: nói "Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions or misunderstandings." Thêm chi tiết ngắn gọn về cách giải quyết (ví dụ thảo luận, xin lỗi) và tránh câu dài lủng củng.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions or misunderstandings. For example, we once disagreed about which cinema to go to, but we talked it through calmly and it didn’t affect our friendship.

× I yes I enjoy chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has redundancy ('I yes I'). It is more natural to start with 'Yes' and use plural 'friends' when speaking generally. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I' and choose singular or plural consistently based on meaning.

× We are we always share our wife our story and sometime we share video fun video with each other.

✓ We always share our life stories and sometimes we share funny videos with each other.

Problems: extra words ('are we'), incorrect word choice ('wife' instead of 'life'), word order and duplication ('video fun video'). Use 'sometimes' (spelled correctly) and correct adjective order 'funny videos'. Suggestion: remove redundant words and choose correct nouns and adjectives.

× I often chat with my friend about study on our land plans, we talk about homework and exam because we want to have each other and sometime we also discuss people we met.

✓ I often chat with my friends about studying our future plans; we talk about homework and exams because we want to help each other, and sometimes we also discuss people we meet.

Issues: subject-verb agreement ('friend' vs 'friends'), incorrect verb forms ('study' should be gerund 'studying'), awkward phrase 'land plans' likely 'future plans', plural 'exams', wrong idiom 'have each other' should be 'help each other', 'sometime' -> 'sometimes', tense consistency 'we meet' (present). Suggestion: use plural where general, gerund after 'about', plural nouns for countable items, and correct idioms.

× We do this all month on a daily basis.

✓ We do this every day throughout the month.

Redundant expressions 'all month on a daily basis' — both mean frequency. Prefer concise phrase 'every day throughout the month' or simply 'every day'. Suggestion: avoid repeating frequency expressions.

× I only like chatting with one friend, especially my best friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend, especially my best friend.

'I only like' is grammatical but slightly awkward; 'prefer' fits the question better. 'Just one friend' clarifies exclusivity. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preferences and 'just' or 'only' placed before the noun.

× This ensure arrived cover, cover conservation and avoid leaking information.

✓ This ensures privacy, keeps conversations private, and avoids leaking information.

Many issues: verb agreement ('ensure' -> 'ensures'), unclear phrases ('arrived cover, cover conservation' are incorrect), use clearer nouns 'privacy' and verbs 'keeps'/'avoids'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and choose clear, standard vocabulary.

× I refer communicating via social media, some chatting app ha have emoji or sticker that we can we we can make our story be it's more become interesting.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media; some chat apps have emojis or stickers that make our conversations more interesting.

Problems: wrong verb 'refer' -> 'prefer', plural agreement 'app ha have' -> 'apps have', redundancy ('we can we we can'), awkward phrasing 'make our story be it's more become interesting' -> 'make our conversations more interesting'. Suggestion: use 'prefer', ensure subject-verb agreement, and remove redundant words.

× Well I sometime I will with my friend because we have different opinion and misunderstand can happen.

✓ Well, sometimes I argue with my friend because we have different opinions and misunderstandings can happen.

Errors: redundant words ('I sometime I will'), tense/modal misuse ('will' not needed), singular/plural ('opinion'->'opinions'), noun form ('misunderstand'->'misunderstandings'). Suggestion: use 'sometimes' and simple present to describe habitual actions; pluralize countable nouns.

× For example one we argue about where to go to the cinema but we address it quickly and it didn't ruin our friendship.

✓ For example, once we argued about where to go to the cinema, but we resolved it quickly and it didn't ruin our friendship.

Tense inconsistency: 'one' -> 'once', 'argue' should be past 'argued' to match 'didn't', 'address it' is awkward -> 'resolved it'. Suggestion: maintain past tense for completed past events and choose appropriate past verbs.