Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms/plurals.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I find conversations exciting because I like sharing my opinions and stories with them, and talking helps me feel connected.

提案: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to list topics. Use correct pluralization and concise phrasing, and give one specific example to make it more concrete.

例: We usually talk about food, sports and video games. For example, we often discuss new restaurants we tried and the latest games we played online.

提案: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with a clear reason using linking words. Correct plural and article usage and avoid repeating words. Add a brief example or consequence.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because I can hear different opinions and perspectives. For instance, when we plan outings, a group discussion brings up more ideas than a one-on-one chat.

提案: State your preference clearly, then give 1–2 concise reasons using linking words. Remove filler words and repeated adjectives. Include a short contrast to show awareness of the other option.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's convenient and quick; I can message friends anytime. However, I still value face-to-face chats for deeper conversations.

提案: Answer directly, then explain with a clear reason and an example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (plural/singular, tense). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but usually about small things. For example, after watching a film we might disagree about whether it was good or not, and that sparks a short argument.

× Sure, I'd like to chat with my friends it it can makes me feel excited because I'm a talkable person.

✓ Sure, I'd like to chat with my friends; it can make me feel excited because I'm a talkative person.

The verb 'makes' is incorrect after 'it can' because modal 'can' should be followed by the base form 'make' (Third person singular rule with modals). Also 'talkable' is not the correct adjective; use 'talkative'. Combine clauses with proper punctuation for clarity.

× I like to express my opinion and my story to my friends.

✓ I like to express my opinions and tell my stories to my friends.

Use plural 'opinions' and 'stories' if referring to multiple instances; 'express my opinion and my story' is awkward. Use parallel verbs: 'express' and 'tell' to match objects, and plural nouns if appropriate.

× We usually talk about the food, sports and also the video game because both me and my friend are like to play in the video games and eating the delicious food.

✓ We usually talk about food, sports, and video games because both my friend and I like to play video games and eat delicious food.

Remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before uncountable/plural general topics. Use correct subject order 'my friend and I'. Use 'like to' with base verb 'play' and parallel 'eat' instead of 'eating'. Use plural 'video games' to match general topic.

× both me and my friend are like to play in the video games and eating the delicious food.

✓ both my friend and I like to play video games and eat delicious food.

Subject pronoun should be 'my friend and I'; verb 'like' must agree and be followed by base verbs 'play' and 'eat'. Do not use 'in the' before 'video games' when talking generally.

× I'd like to chat with a group of people because I want to receive the different opinion, their perspective from the different person.

✓ I'd like to chat with a group of people because I want to hear different opinions and perspectives from different people.

Use plural 'opinions' and 'perspectives' for general ideas. 'Receive' is odd with 'opinion'—use 'hear'. Avoid 'the different' which incorrectly specifies; use 'different' without 'the'. Use 'people' plural instead of 'person'.

× And if I only chat with one friend, I think I will feel a little lonely.

✓ If I chat with only one friend, I think I will feel a little lonely.

Minor word order improvement: place 'only' before 'one friend' for natural emphasis. Grammar is otherwise acceptable.

× Umm actually I think both is OK, but now I prefer to chat with other people in the social media because it's really convenient for me.

✓ Umm actually I think both are OK, but now I prefer to chat with other people on social media because it's really convenient for me.

'Both' is plural, so use 'are'. Use preposition 'on social media' (not 'in the social media'). Omit 'the' before 'social media'.

× Just type and send a message to the friend.

✓ I just type and send a message to a friend.

Maintain subject 'I' for clarity and use 'a friend' (not 'the friend') for general reference. Keep tense consistent with previous sentence.

× It's quick and efficient. Efficient.

✓ It's quick and efficient.

Repeating 'Efficient.' is redundant; combine into one sentence. Place adverb/adjective appropriately.

× Yeah, to be honest, I sometimes argue with my friend, Uh, but it's just because some bit, the little things like umm, for example, after we're watching a movie and we have the different feeling about this movie. So I will, we will argue.

✓ Yeah, to be honest, I sometimes argue with my friend, but it's just because of small things. For example, after we watch a movie and have different feelings about it, we will argue.

Use 'because of' to indicate cause. 'Some bit, the little things' is incorrect—use 'small things'. Change 'after we're watching' to simple present 'after we watch' for habitual action. Use 'have different feelings about it' and remove awkward 'I will, we will' to 'we will argue'.