Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は簡潔で直接的ですが、文法ミスと語順の問題、そして不自然な表現が目立ちます。具体的には“contact with friends more easily if”は不完全で、“Friends and me, uh, have distance”は英語として不自然です。改善策：1) 主題文を明確にする（例: “Yes, I do.”）。2) 理由は一文で完結に述べ、接続詞（because, so）を正しく使う。3) 距離を表す表現は“we live far apart”や“we are far away from each other”を使う。4) 余計な中断（uh）を減らす。

例: Yes, I do. I can keep in touch with friends more easily because we live far apart, so messaging helps us stay up to date.

提案: 主張は明確ですが語順と文法（冠詞、省略）に問題があります。また“so we have tests many tests so”の繰り返しや冗長表現を避ける必要があります。改善策：1) 主語と時制を整える（I am a third-year high school student）。2) 理由を一度に述べ、接続詞を適切に使う。3) 具体例（どの教科やどのような準備）を付け加えると良い。

例: I usually talk about my studies because I’m a third-year high school student and we have many exams, so we discuss revision plans and share tips for different subjects.

提案: 答えは伝わりますが、不完全で曖昧な文があり、理由が十分に説明されていません。“I am not”で終わるのは不明確です。改善策：1) 明確なトピック文（I prefer chatting with one friend）を使う。2) 理由は具体的に述べる（例：難しい、落ち着いて話せる）。3) 接続詞（because, when）で文をつなぎ、余計な間を減らす。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in a group it’s hard to join the conversation and I can’t express my ideas clearly.

提案: 意図は伝わるが文が断片的で不完全です。“By doing so I can”の後に何をできるのか明確に述べる必要があります。また“People face, people feel how feel”は不自然です。改善策：1) 完全な主旨文（I prefer face-to-face communication）を述べる。2) 明確な理由を続ける（表情やトーンが分かるなど）。3) 具体例を添えると説得力が上がる。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

提案: 答えは短く明快ですが少し不自然な末尾（with uh）があります。改善策：1) 理由をもう少し具体的にする（例：we respect each other or we solve problems calmly）。2) 冗長な接続や中断を無くす。3) 例や短い状況説明を加えると良い。

例: No, I don’t. My friends are kind and we usually resolve disagreements calmly, so we rarely argue.

× Yes I do because I can contact with friends more easily if. Friends and me, uh, have distance.

✓ Yes, I do because I can contact my friends more easily. My friends and I live far apart.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and unnatural phrasing. 'Contact with friends' should be 'contact my friends' (no 'with' after contact). 'Friends and me' is incorrect subject form; use 'My friends and I'. The phrase 'have distance' is unnatural; use 'live far apart'. Also add commas and periods for clarity. Suggestion: Use subject pronouns for subjects (I, he, she) and object pronouns for objects (me, him). Use natural collocations like 'contact someone' and 'live far apart'.

× I usually chat with friends about study because I am 3rd grade high school student so we have tests many tests so.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about studying because I am a third-year high school student, so we have many tests.

Errors involve verb form and articles. 'About study' should be 'about studying' (gerund after 'about'). '3rd grade high school student' is unnatural; use 'a third-year high school student' and include the article 'a'. Word order 'we have tests many tests' should be 'we have many tests'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'about' and include articles before singular countable nouns; place quantifiers before nouns ('many tests').

× I prefer only a friend because if they are many people chat. I can not chat because uh, I am not.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because if many people are chatting, I cannot join the conversation easily.

Problems: 'only a friend' is awkward; use 'just one friend'. 'They are many people chat' mixes word order and number agreement; correct order is 'if many people are chatting'. 'I can not chat because I am not' is incomplete; clarify with 'I cannot join the conversation easily'. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb order, place quantifiers before nouns, and complete clauses with clear verbs.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because. By doing so I can. No. People face, people feel how feel.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, by doing so, people can see how others feel.

The original has fragmented sentences and incorrect phrasing. Use the prepositional phrase 'face to face' (with hyphens optional) and combine clauses: 'because, by doing so, people can see how others feel.' 'People face, people feel how feel' is ungrammatical and redundant. Suggestion: Combine fragments into a single clear sentence and use correct prepositional phrases and object references ('others').

× No, I don't because my friend is kind so we don't have to argue with uh.

✓ No, I don't because my friends are kind, so we don't have to argue.

Pronoun and number errors: 'my friend is kind' conflicts with 'we'; if speaking about a group use 'my friends are kind'. The phrase 'argue with uh' is incomplete; simply 'argue' suffices. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun number matches (singular/plural) across clauses and avoid trailing fillers; finish the sentence with a complete verb phrase.