Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“distrust”用法不准确，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更贴切的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever I feel bored or excited, I like to share my daily experiences with them.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明聊天内容。

例: I usually talk about my feelings and experiences, such as what I learned during the day or how I feel about certain things.

提案: 表达不自然且有语法错误，如“chat one thing very previously”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows me to share my deepest feelings more openly.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法结构，并明确表达观点。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friend's real expressions and better understand their emotions.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误明显，表达不流畅。建议避免重复，使用完整句子清晰表达观点。

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, and I try to express my feelings clearly.

× When I feel bored or distrust, or when I'm very exciting, I always like chatting with my best friends.

✓ When I feel bored or distrustful, or when I'm very excited, I always like chatting with my best friends.

这里'exciting'用错了，应该用形容人的情绪的形容词'excited'，而'distrust'应改为形容词'distrustful'，表示感到不信任。

× Today I'll tell them what happened in the days of my life.

✓ Today I'll tell them what has happened in my life recently.

原句结构不清晰，'in the days of my life'表达不自然，改为'recently'更符合语境。

× When I feel depressed or excited or lonely, I always chat with my friends, with the contacts we chat among varieties of things like what I have learned today, what I feel about.

✓ When I feel depressed, excited, or lonely, I always chat with my friends. We talk about various things like what I have learned today and how I feel.

原句结构混乱，重复使用'chat'和'with the contacts'不合适，改为更简洁的表达。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend. Through that way I can express the deepest feeling from myself and we can chat one thing very previously.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. In that way, I can express my deepest feelings, and we can discuss things more privately.

'Through that way'应改为'in that way'，'chat one thing very previously'表达错误，改为'discuss things more privately'更合适。

× I prefer to communicate face to face as in that way can I see the real expression on my friend's face, and only in that way can I feel the emotion from he or she and I can react from.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in that way I can see the real expression on my friend's face, and only then can I feel their emotions and respond accordingly.

句子结构错误，'from he or she'应改为'their'，'react from'表达不正确，改为'respond accordingly'。

× Yes, sometimes I will argue. I argue with my friends. For the things that I don't agree with him or her and I can express what I, umm, what my feelings about this thing.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about things I don't agree with, and I can express my feelings about these things.

'For the things that I don't agree with him or her'结构不正确，改为'about things I don't agree with'更自然，'what I, umm, what my feelings about this thing'表达不完整，改为'express my feelings about these things'。