Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear direct answer first, then briefly explain specific examples of rules. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, correct pronouns) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep to 2–3 short sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

例: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, students must wear a uniform and arrive on time, which teachers and parents enforce to keep everyone safe and orderly.

提案: State your opinion directly, then give one clear reason and a concrete example. Avoid repeating words (e.g., 'because') and choose precise vocabulary ('prevent' instead of 'predict'; 'offenses' instead of 'offender').

例: Yes, I think more rules could help because they can prevent accidents and unsafe behaviour. For example, a rule about crossing the road with supervision could reduce traffic accidents.

提案: Answer the question directly (Yes/No) and then describe what made the teacher dedicated with simple, concrete actions (e.g., extra lessons, feedback). Use correct vocabulary and avoid confusing or inappropriate words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher last year. She gave extra after-school lessons and gave detailed feedback to help each student improve.

提案: First choose and state a clear preference (more or fewer rules), then support it with a reason and an example. Use correct tense and grammar ('I prefer', 'schools are strict', 'keep time'). Avoid saying both options at once.

例: I prefer more rules at school because they help students develop discipline. For example, strict punctuality rules improve time management and reduce lateness.

提案: Answer clearly and give a concise example describing the teacher's behaviour and how it affected you. Use correct past tense and simple vocabulary; avoid filler sounds. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in first grade. He ran the class like a drill sergeant and expected perfect behaviour, which made me more disciplined but also nervous.

提案: Start with a clear yes/no and a short reason, then give one specific example comparing the systems. Use concise linking words ('because', 'for example') and correct phrasing ('rule-free', 'I studied in the Philippines').

例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because I studied in the Philippines and appreciated its flexible approach. For example, students there have more freedom to choose projects, which encourages creativity.

× Yes they are because students are out of in the school so it don't have to.

✓ Yes, there are rules because students are at school, so they don't have to [do certain things].

Pronoun and placeholder errors: 'they' unclear, and 'it' misused for plural 'students'. Also 'don't' should agree with plural 'students' and 'there are' (there be) is needed to indicate existence of rules. Suggest using 'there are rules' and 'they don't' for plural agreement; clarify the action omitted in brackets.

× Decided by teachers or my our parents are used to protect.

✓ Rules are decided by teachers or by parents to protect students.

The original is ungrammatical word order and incorrect pronoun use ('my our'). Use passive 'are decided' or active 'teachers or parents decide' and state purpose 'to protect students'. Remove redundant possessive.

× Yes they do because it is important to predict rules because teachers decided to protect for students from accidents such as offender and car accidents.

✓ Yes, I think so because it is important to have clear rules; teachers decide them to protect students from accidents like violence and traffic accidents.

Misuse of 'predict' — choose 'have' or 'set' rules. Tense agreement: 'decided' should be present 'decide' for general statements. Preposition use: 'protect for' incorrect; use 'protect students from'. Also 'offender' is wrong noun; use 'violence' or 'crime'. Modal 'would' not necessary here; use present tense for general opinion.

× Yesterday hard because teaching how to see their students under the oral the students intercourse for example, they protect from action.

✓ I had a difficult experience yesterday because the teacher focused on observing students during oral practice; for example, the teacher protected them from inappropriate behavior.

Original sentence is incoherent with wrong word choices ('intercourse' wrong meaning, 'under the oral'). Clarify intended meaning: 'oral practice' or 'oral exam'. Use past tense 'had' and correct noun phrases. Explain unclear parts and replace with appropriate vocabulary.

× Yes I do. I preferred to have more or fewer rules at school because Japanese school are strict. For example, students should be keep time management.

✓ Yes. I prefer to have more rules at school because Japanese schools are strict. For example, students should keep good time management.

Tense and agreement: 'preferred' (past) should be present 'prefer' for current preference. 'Japanese school are' subject-verb agreement: use plural 'schools are'. 'be keep' incorrect verb form; use 'keep' and add adjective 'good' for clarity. Quantifier 'more or fewer' contradicted — choose 'more' to match explanation.

× Yes, I hardly heard so that when I was first grade I was in strict teacher such as. MMM. Military.

✓ Yes, I remember a very strict teacher when I was in first grade; the style was almost military-like.

Pronoun and phrase issues: 'I hardly heard' is incorrect for 'I remember'. 'I was first grade' needs 'in first grade'. 'I was in strict teacher' incorrect structure; use 'I had a strict teacher' or 'a teacher was strict'. Clarify 'military' as 'military-like'.

× Yes, I want to work on the teacher in a free school because I went to the Philippines for studying English.

✓ Yes, I want to work as a teacher in a free school because I went to the Philippines to study English.

Preposition and verb form errors: 'work on the teacher' incorrect — use 'work as a teacher'. 'for studying English' should be 'to study English' to show purpose.

× So Philippine schools are very free rules.

✓ So Philippine schools have very few rules.

Article and word choice: 'very free rules' is ungrammatical. Use 'have very few rules' or 'are less strict'. Also 'Philippine schools' may be 'Philippine schools' or 'schools in the Philippines' for clarity.

× So I like that educational system.

✓ So I like that education system.

Word choice: 'educational system' is acceptable but 'education system' is more natural in this context. Minor; original is understandable but prefer concise noun phrase.