Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời có sự lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các quy tắc và lý do tại sao chúng quan trọng.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms to promote equality and maintain discipline. Additionally, punctuality and respect towards teachers are strictly enforced to create a positive learning environment.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng khó hiểu. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của mình.

例: I don't think having more rules would benefit students. In my opinion, it's better to have a few basic rules that everyone can follow easily, rather than many complicated ones that might confuse or frustrate students.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và mô tả cụ thể về giáo viên bạn ngưỡng mộ.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. My primary school teacher inspired me because she was very kind, patient, and always encouraged me to do my best.

× Student must follow many rules in your school like wearing wearing uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

✓ Students must follow many rules in your school like wearing uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

The subject 'Student' should be plural 'Students' to agree with the plural verb 'must follow' and the context of multiple students. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Student must follow many rules in your school like wearing wearing uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

✓ Students must follow many rules in your school like wearing a uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

The noun 'uniform' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× Student must follow many rules in your school like wearing wearing uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

✓ Students must follow many rules in their school like wearing a uniform in school to make a sense of equality and discipline.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect because the student is talking about their own school, so 'their' is appropriate. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× I don't think it because I think people must follow, but not much other people can follow a a basic rules and basic rule and.

✓ I don't think so because I think people must follow, but not many people can follow basic rules.

The phrase 'not much other people' is incorrect; 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'people'. Also, 'a a basic rules and basic rule and' is incorrect and redundant. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× I don't think it because I think people must follow, but not much other people can follow a a basic rules and basic rule and.

✓ I don't think so because I think people must follow, but not many people can follow basic rules.

The phrase 'a a basic rules and basic rule and' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Basic rules' is plural and does not need 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I don't think it because I think people must follow, but not much other people can follow a a basic rules and basic rule and.

✓ I don't think so because I think people must follow, but not many people can follow basic rules.

The phrase 'I don't think it' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I don't think so'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× I I made a lot of art good teacher.

✓ I have had a lot of good teachers.

The phrase 'a lot of art good teacher' is incorrect. 'A lot of' is used with plural countable nouns or uncountable nouns, and 'art' seems misplaced. The correct plural form 'teachers' fits the context. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I I made a lot of art good teacher.

✓ I have had a lot of good teachers.

The phrase 'I I made' is incorrect; it should be 'I have had' to express experience. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb tense.

× But for me I think a primary teacher is have a inspire for me because she is very kind, phone and beautiful.

✓ But for me, I think a primary teacher is an inspiration for me because she is very kind, funny and beautiful.

The phrase 'is have a inspire' is incorrect; 'is an inspiration' is correct. Also, 'phone' is likely a typo for 'funny'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and word choice.

× But for me I think a primary teacher is have a inspire for me because she is very kind, phone and beautiful.

✓ But for me, I think a primary teacher is an inspiration for me because she is very kind, funny and beautiful.

The word 'phone' is incorrect here; it should be 'funny', an adjective describing the teacher. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.