Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“not allowed to wearing”应为“not allowed to wear”，句子结构不完整且有重复。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免语法错误，同时简化表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to wear colorful clothes or have long hair. We must wear uniforms provided by the school because teachers believe it helps maintain discipline.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“so much rules”应为“too many rules”，“makes them has no motivation”应为“make them lose motivation”。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，同时避免重复词汇，使表达更准确。

例: I don't think so because too many rules can harm students' creativity and make them lose motivation to innovate and focus on their personal growth.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误，如“how to doing”应为“how to do”，“with patient”应为“patiently”，“he's a very kindness people”应为“he is a very kind person”。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复表达，提升语言自然度。

例: Yes, I have. I'd like to talk about my supervisor during my second internship. He taught me how to complete work tasks clearly and patiently. He is a very kind person.

× students are not allowed to wearing colorful clothes or have long hair.

✓ students are not allowed to wear colorful clothes or have long hair.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式。这里的allowed后面应接to wear，而不是to wearing。

× wear uniform provide from school office

✓ wear uniform provided by the school office

动词provide应使用过去分词provided作定语修饰uniform，且介词应为by表示动作的执行者。

× teachers believe that would be make teenagers easy to control.

✓ teachers believe that it would make teenagers easy to control.

句子缺少主语it，且would后应接动词原形make，不能用be make。

× I believe so much rules would damage of creativity of students

✓ I believe too many rules would damage the creativity of students

rules是可数名词，需用too many而非so much；damage后不加介词of，且the creativity更合适。

× makes them has no motivation to do to do to make some innovation

✓ makes them have no motivation to do to make some innovation

makes后面主语them，谓语动词应为have而非has。

× He taught me about how to doing work tasks very clearly with patient

✓ He taught me about how to do work tasks very clearly with patience

to后应接动词原形do，而非doing；patient应为名词patience，表示耐心。

× he's a very kindness people, he's very kindness.

✓ he's a very kind person, he's very kind.

kindness是名词，形容词形式是kind；people是复数名词，单数应为person。