Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. For example, you could say: "Yes, my school has many rules set by the authorities to ensure students maintain discipline." This is natural, concise, and directly answers the question.

例: Yes, my school has many rules set by the authorities to ensure students maintain discipline.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and better vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition. For example: "Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help us learn moral values and show respect to teachers. Moreover, following rules can open up more opportunities for us."

例: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help us learn moral values and show respect to teachers. Moreover, following rules can open up more opportunities for us.

提案: Your answer is quite long and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and clear, and organise your ideas logically. For example: "Yes, one of my best teachers is Amitaj. She is very kind and punctual. She teaches me English and gives useful ideas on how to improve my vocabulary and skills."

例: Yes, one of my best teachers is Amitaj. She is very kind and punctual. She teaches me English and gives useful ideas on how to improve my vocabulary and skills.

× Yes, there are so many rules in my schools that rules are made by a higher authority to make all students in disciplines and.

✓ Yes, there are so many rules in my school that rules are made by a higher authority to make all students disciplined.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because the student is likely referring to their own school. Also, 'make all students in disciplines' is incorrect; it should be 'make all students disciplined' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I think students can get a lot of a benefit.

✓ Yes, I think students can get a lot of benefits.

The phrase 'a lot of a benefit' is incorrect. 'Benefit' is a countable noun here, so it should be plural 'benefits' and 'a lot of' should directly modify the plural noun without 'a'.

× They can learn a moral values and they can learn how to deliver respect to teachers and also get a lot of opportunities by using the rules and regulations.

✓ They can learn moral values and they can learn how to show respect to teachers and also get a lot of opportunities by following the rules and regulations.

'Moral values' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'deliver respect' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'show respect'. Additionally, 'using the rules' is better expressed as 'following the rules'.

× Yes, I have so many teachers during my school time but the one of the most is Amitaj.

✓ Yes, I had many teachers during my school time but one of the best is Amitaj.

'So many teachers' is acceptable but 'during my school time' should be 'during my school years' or 'when I was at school'. Also, 'the one of the most' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best' to express the intended meaning.

× She's very nice and punctual because she always teach me English and also tell tell a idea how we can learn a vocabulary, how we can enhance my skills I can learn.

✓ She's very nice and punctual because she always teaches me English and also tells me ideas on how we can learn vocabulary and how I can enhance my skills.

The verbs 'teach' and 'tell' need to be in third person singular form 'teaches' and 'tells' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, 'tell tell a idea' is a repetition and incorrect article usage; it should be 'tells me ideas'. The phrase 'learn a vocabulary' is incorrect; 'learn vocabulary' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.