Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain the rules with specific details using correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, students must carry their university ID cards at all times. If someone is late, they need to show their card to enter the class. These rules help maintain order and security.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and supporting details. Try to give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with specific examples. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they create a safer environment. For instance, rules about attendance and behavior can help prevent disruptions during lectures.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain why you like the teacher with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I have a favorite teacher who does his job very well. He shares all his knowledge with us and uses a unique teaching style that makes learning interesting and easy to understand.

× My school has some specific role.

✓ My school has some specific rules.

The word 'role' is singular, but the context suggests multiple rules, so the plural form 'rules' is appropriate.

× You need university card to let's say late.

✓ You need a university card to, let's say, be late.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'university card' and the phrase 'let's say late' is incomplete; adding 'be' clarifies the meaning.

× Same in the university second when you want.

✓ It's the same in the university when you want to leave early.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring it provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have one teacher which I which is my favorite because he he he gave us everything what he knows he has different style of studying more like.

✓ Yes, I have one teacher who is my favorite because he gave us everything he knows and has a different style of teaching.

The pronoun 'which' is incorrect for people; 'who' should be used. Also, the sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical; simplifying and correcting verb forms improves clarity.