Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有些内容重复。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring cell phones to class because they can be distracting. Teachers often have to remind us to put them away, which interrupts lessons.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且用词不准确（如“roots”应为“rules”）。建议注意词汇准确性，句子结构清晰，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Honestly, it depends on the students. Since many students lack self-discipline, having more rules can help them stay organized and understand what is expected of them at school. Therefore, more rules might prevent unexpected problems.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议完整回答问题，注意代词一致性，使用正确的时态，并组织清晰的句子。

例: Yes, I had a great English teacher in high school. He helped us improve our pronunciation by encouraging us to read passages and articles after class every day. After one semester, I noticed significant improvement in my speaking skills.

× The most impressive 1 is that we are not allowed to bring our cell phones in class because the teachers think that we might.

✓ The most impressive one is that we are not allowed to bring our cell phones to class because the teachers think that we might.

这里的数字“1”应改为单词“one”，表示“最令人印象深刻的一条规则”。另外，介词应为“to class”而非“in class”。

× because the teachers think that we might.

✓ because the teachers think that we might play games.

句子不完整，‘might’后应接动词，表示可能做某事。这里应补充动词短语，如‘play games’。

× Most of the students are quite like a they lack of self-discipline.

✓ Most of the students are quite like they lack self-discipline.

句子结构混乱，‘like a’不合适，应去掉‘a’并调整句子结构。

× So I think it's better for them to have more roots and this can help them to organize themselves and they know what to do in the school.

✓ So I think it's better for them to have more rules and this can help them to organize themselves and know what to do in school.

‘roots’应为‘rules’，表示“规则”。另外，‘in the school’中‘the’可省略，通常说‘in school’。

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

问题是现在时态，回答应使用一般现在时“do”而非过去时“did”。

× he tried to help us to improve her pronunciation and every day after the school he would just ask us to stay there and try to read more passages and articles that we can.

✓ he tried to help us improve our pronunciation and every day after school he would just ask us to stay and try to read as many passages and articles as we could.

‘her pronunciation’应为‘our pronunciation’，因为是帮助学生。‘after the school’应为‘after school’。‘try to read more passages and articles that we can’结构不正确，应改为‘try to read as many passages and articles as we could’。

× And after a a semester only I think every.

✓ And after only a semester, I think everyone improved.

句子不完整且有重复‘a a’，应改为完整句子，表达“仅仅一个学期后，我认为每个人都有进步”。