Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of rules. Also, correct grammar errors such as 'student' to 'students'.

例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, students must wear the proper uniform and keep their nails trimmed. Additionally, maintaining discipline is very important to create a good learning environment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and vague. Try to be more specific about how additional rules can benefit students. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid repeating the word 'rules' excessively.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them learn to behave respectfully. Moreover, clear rules can guide students to develop good habits and understand their responsibilities better.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts. Avoid repetition and use precise vocabulary. Provide specific reasons or examples to explain why the teacher is good at her job.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is very organized and patient, which helps students understand the lessons clearly. For instance, she always prepares detailed notes and encourages us to ask questions.

× Yes, there are different rules for student at school like they need to wear proper uniform, they need to cut their nails, they need to maintain their discipline and.

✓ Yes, there are different rules for students at school like they need to wear proper uniforms, they need to cut their nails, they need to maintain their discipline.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject 'rules'. Also, 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing of multiple students. This correction ensures subject and object agreement in number.

× Yes, there are different rules for student at school like they need to wear proper uniform, they need to cut their nails, they need to maintain their discipline and.

✓ Yes, there are different rules for students at school, such as wearing proper uniforms, cutting their nails, and maintaining their discipline.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'and' and has a list that is not well structured. Replacing 'like' with 'such as' and restructuring the list improves clarity and sentence completeness.

× Yes, in my perspective, students would benefit more from rules because they know how to behave respectfully and follow the rules and they know about various kind of things.

✓ Yes, from my perspective, students would benefit more from rules because they learn how to behave respectfully, follow the rules, and know about various kinds of things.

The phrase 'in my perspective' is better expressed as 'from my perspective'. Also, 'various kind of things' should be 'various kinds of things' to correctly use the quantifier with plural nouns. Additionally, 'they know how to behave respectfully and follow the rules and they know about' is improved by breaking into clearer parts.

× Yes, I do have teacher who does her job very well because she was the she was so corridor person and she does her work very well.

✓ Yes, I do have a teacher who does her job very well because she is a very courteous person and she does her work very well.

The word 'teacher' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'she was the she was so corridor person' is incorrect; 'corridor' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'courteous'. Also, 'was' should be 'is' to maintain present tense consistency. This correction fixes article usage, word choice, and tense.