Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and add a linking phrase to connect your examples smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas to keep your response concise and natural.

例: Yes, my school has several rules. For instance, students must wear uniforms and arrive on time for every class. These regulations not only promote discipline but also foster a productive atmosphere for learning.

提案: Your answer addresses the question well, but it would be better to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and to avoid minor grammatical errors. Also, try to provide a more specific example or reason to support your opinion.

例: I think additional rules can be helpful up to a point because they ensure discipline and structure, which are vital for academic success. However, if there are too many rules, they might limit students' creativity and freedom, which could negatively affect their motivation.

提案: Your answer is heartfelt and relevant, but it contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words, use correct sentence structures, and include linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I have had many wonderful and knowledgeable teachers, but my high school English teacher stands out. Not only did she teach me English effectively, but she also taught me valuable life lessons about resilience and perseverance during difficult times.

× However, too many rules might restrict students creativity and freedom, so it's important.

✓ However, too many rules might restrict students' creativity and freedom, so it's important.

The sentence is missing the possessive apostrophe in 'students creativity'. It should be 'students' creativity' to indicate that the creativity belongs to the students. This is a common error involving the use of the definite article and possessive form.

× However, I'd I'd say that my English teacher in high school is the best teacher I have ever had.

✓ However, I'd say that my English teacher in high school is the best teacher I have ever had.

The phrase 'I'd I'd say' contains a repeated contraction, which is a sentence structure error. Removing the duplicate 'I'd' corrects the sentence and improves clarity.

× Not only that she taught me English, but also a lot about life and how to be strong and not give up when facing difficulties.

✓ Not only did she teach me English, but also a lot about life and how to be strong and not give up when facing difficulties.

The original sentence lacks the correct auxiliary verb 'did' after 'Not only' to form the inversion required in this structure. Correcting it to 'Not only did she teach me...' fixes the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.