Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and specific. Instead of 'regulations in my college,' say 'rules that students must follow at my school.' Also, add a brief example to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, there are several rules that students must follow at my school, such as attending classes on time and respecting teachers and classmates.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion directly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I think students could benefit from having more rules about speaking in class because it would help improve their communication skills; however, these rules should not be too strict to avoid making students feel uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is vague and lacks coherence. Try to answer directly with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete phrases like 'you doing, etcetera.'

例: Yes, I have several teachers who do their job very well. For example, my English teacher prepares interesting exercises and explains lessons clearly, which helps me understand the material better.

× Yeah, speaking is what obviously benefit from more rules, but it shouldn't be more disturbing for them.

✓ Yeah, speaking is what obviously benefits from more rules, but it shouldn't be more disturbing for them.

The verb 'benefit' should be in the third person singular form 'benefits' to agree with the singular subject 'speaking'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving the verb form ending in -s for third person singular present tense.

× Almost every teacher in my community does their work, completely do everything. Exercises, teaching, you doing, etcetera.

✓ Almost every teacher in my community does his or her work, completely does everything: exercises, teaching, you doing, etcetera.

The pronoun 'their' is plural and does not agree with the singular subject 'every teacher'. The correct singular pronouns 'his or her' should be used. Also, the verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement issue.