Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the rules.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear uniforms to maintain discipline and create a sense of unity.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because clear regulations help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment.

提案: Your answer is too brief and negative without explanation. Try to provide more details and avoid making broad negative statements. Use linking words to explain your opinion.

例: I don't have a specific teacher in mind because some teachers at my school do not always follow the regulations, which affects their performance.

× At my schools, students must wear uniforms to maintenance discipline.

✓ At my school, students must wear uniforms to maintain discipline.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because the speaker refers to their own school. Also, 'maintenance' is a noun, but the verb 'maintain' is needed here to express the action of keeping discipline.

× At my schools, students must wear uniforms to maintenance discipline.

✓ At my school, students must wear uniforms to maintain discipline.

The phrase 'to maintenance discipline' is incorrect because 'maintenance' is a noun. The correct form is the verb 'maintain' to indicate the purpose of wearing uniforms.

× Yes, students get more benefit from regulations such as maintenance and discipline.

✓ Yes, students get more benefits from regulations such as maintaining discipline.

The word 'benefit' should be plural 'benefits' to match the plural subject 'students'. Also, 'maintenance' should be changed to 'maintaining' to correctly express the action related to discipline.

× Yes, students get more benefit from regulations such as maintenance and discipline.

✓ Yes, students get more benefits from regulations such as maintaining discipline.

'Maintenance' is a noun, but here the gerund 'maintaining' is needed to describe the action related to discipline.