Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，应该使用动词原形或动名词形式。此外，回答较为简短，缺乏细节。建议改进句子结构，增加具体细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, students are required to run every morning before classes start to promote physical fitness and discipline.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且用词不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Honestly, I don't think having more rules would help. Instead, students should focus on developing their potential rather than just following strict regulations.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不完整且含糊。建议使用完整句子，明确表达对老师的评价，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, my Chinese teacher in high school did an excellent job. He not only taught us language skills but also inspired us with his positive attitude towards life and personal growth.

× Students are requested to running in the morning before we go to class.

✓ Students are requested to run in the morning before we go to class.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式running。正确用法是to run。

× I think students should develop the potential as more as possible and not just following the rules.

✓ I think students should develop their potential as much as possible and not just follow the rules.

表达“尽可能多”时应使用as much as possible，而不是as more as possible。同时，develop后面应接名词potential，前面加上所有格their更准确。

× Sure, the Chinese teacher in my high school did his great job and really helped me a lot.

✓ Sure, the Chinese teacher in my high school did a great job and really helped me a lot.

短语是“do a great job”，job前应加不定冠词a，而不是his。

× I really appreciate his attitude to walk, to live and to being a person.

✓ I really appreciate his attitude towards walking, living and being a person.

动词appreciate后面接名词或动名词，表达“对……的态度”应使用介词towards，且后面动词应用动名词形式。