Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，注意主谓一致和时态使用，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In Taiwan, many schools require students to wear uniforms because it helps them look more energetic. Moreover, wearing a uniform means students need to follow the school's rules. Therefore, I think this is a common rule in Taiwan.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用恰当的连接词，并且注意单复数和词形变化。

例: Actually, I don't think so because if students always have to follow many school regulations, it may limit their creativity. Therefore, I believe rules should be flexible sometimes.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议练习使用完整句子，注意时态和代词的正确使用，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I am lucky to have a teacher in high school who did her job very well. She was my mentor and taught me a lot about how to build friendships with others.

× In Taiwan, many schools usually require student to wear uniform because they think if student wear uniform can let them look like more energetic and when they wear the uniform means they need to obey school's rules.

✓ In Taiwan, many schools usually require students to wear uniforms because they think if students wear uniforms it can make them look more energetic, and when they wear the uniform it means they need to obey the school's rules.

这里'student'和'uniform'应该用复数形式，因为指的是多个学生和多套校服。英语中，表示一般情况时，复数形式更合适。

× In Taiwan, many schools usually require student to wear uniform because they think if student wear uniform can let them look like more energetic and when they wear the uniform means they need to obey school's rules.

✓ In Taiwan, many schools usually require students to wear uniforms because they think if students wear uniforms it can make them look more energetic, and when they wear the uniform it means they need to obey the school's rules.

'school's rules'前面缺少定冠词'the'，应为'the school's rules'，表示特指某个学校的规则。

× Actually I don't think so, since if student always need to follow the numerous schools, regulations may cause them to not have like a create create creative ideas or thinking ways.

✓ Actually I don't think so, since if students always need to follow numerous school regulations, it may cause them to not have creative ideas or ways of thinking.

'student'应为复数'students'，'schools, regulations'表达不准确，应为'school regulations'，表示学校的规章制度。

× Actually I don't think so, since if student always need to follow the numerous schools, regulations may cause them to not have like a create create creative ideas or thinking ways.

✓ Actually I don't think so, since if students always need to follow numerous school regulations, it may cause them to not have creative ideas or ways of thinking.

'create create creative'重复且错误，应为'creative'，形容词用来修饰'ideas'。

× Actually I don't think so, since if student always need to follow the numerous schools, regulations may cause them to not have like a create create creative ideas or thinking ways.

✓ Actually I don't think so, since if students always need to follow numerous school regulations, it may cause them to not have creative ideas or ways of thinking.

'the numerous schools'中的'the'不合适，'numerous school regulations'更准确，表示许多学校的规章。

× Yes I think I am just lucky because I met 1 teacher is like a really did their job very well in my high school and she's my mentor and she told me a lot of knowledge and information about how to make friendship with other people.

✓ Yes, I think I am just lucky because I met a teacher who really did her job very well in my high school. She's my mentor and she told me a lot of knowledge and information about how to make friends with other people.

'1 teacher is like a really did their job'结构混乱，应改为'a teacher who really did her job'，'their'改为对应的单数女性代词'hers'。此外，'make friendship'应为'make friends'。