Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议你使用更准确的语法结构，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day, eating is not allowed in the classroom, and drinking water during lessons is prohibited. These rules help maintain order and discipline.

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议你使用更丰富的词汇和句型，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because as teenagers, we sometimes lack self-discipline. Therefore, having clear rules helps us understand what behaviors are acceptable and what are not, which promotes a better learning environment.

提案: 你的回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达有较多错误，句子结构混乱。建议你先用一句话明确回答，再用具体细节支持，并注意语法和连贯性。

例: Yes, I had an excellent Chinese teacher in grade 9. Her classes were very interesting, and all the students enjoyed them. She was serious about teaching but also very kind and gentle, which made learning enjoyable.

× when the teacher having the class we can't drink water

✓ when the teacher is having the class we can't drink water

这里缺少助动词is，动词having需要用现在进行时形式，表示正在进行的动作。正确结构是be动词+动词ing形式。

× we should study uniform every day

✓ we should wear uniform every day

动词study后面不接uniform，应该用wear表示穿着校服。

× we can't eat some food in the class

✓ we can't eat some food in class

在英语中，表示在教室里通常用in class，不用the class。

× They can make me know what should I do and what I shouldn't do.

✓ They can help me know what I should do and what I shouldn't do.

make sb. do sth.结构后面不接know，应该用help sb. do sth.；另外，疑问句语序不适合陈述句，应改为陈述语序。

× when I was grade 9, I met a very good Chinese teacher or she is good at her jobs

✓ when I was in grade 9, I met a very good Chinese teacher who was good at her job

表示年级时应加介词in；or连接两句不合适，应改为定语从句who；jobs应为单数job。

× she classes are very interesting and we all we all very like her classes

✓ her classes are very interesting and we all like her classes very much

she classes错误，应为her classes；we all we all重复，应删去一个；like后面加副词very much修饰。

× she is serious, but she also gentle well like her.

✓ she is serious, but she is also gentle. We all like her.

gentle是形容词，缺少系动词is；well用法不当，应分成两句表达喜欢她。