Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, there are pretty abundant number of rules in my school and we have to follow the rule in terms of equality and sense of autonomous. The school consists pretty much.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Of course, students get benefited from this trick rule and they become pretty much disciplined and persistent because of this rule. And rule plays a pivotal point in our life in terms of doing or pursuing any courses.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes, I witnessed a teacher who are very punctual at his work or teaching. Whenever I come across to know that he's a he's an English teacher, I just very fond of him to learn about the punctuality.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly state the presence of rules and give specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague phrases like 'pretty much'.
例: Yes, my school has several rules that students must follow, such as respecting others and maintaining discipline. These rules help create a fair and orderly environment for everyone.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer needs clearer expression and more relevant vocabulary. Avoid vague terms like 'trick rule' and explain how rules benefit students with specific reasons. Use linking words to improve flow.
例: Yes, I believe that having more rules can help students become more disciplined and focused. For example, rules about punctuality encourage students to manage their time better, which benefits their studies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and express your ideas clearly. Provide specific details about the teacher's qualities and use linking words for coherence.
例: Yes, I have an English teacher who is very punctual and dedicated. I admire him because his punctuality sets a good example for students and helps us learn effectively.
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