Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“shouldn't back”应为“shouldn't go back”。建议注意动词搭配和时态的正确使用。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

例: There is a rule that students must return to the dormitory before 11:00 p.m. I believe this helps ensure their safety and keeps the school orderly.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“Without rule all the order can be maintained”应为“Without rules, order cannot be maintained”。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，同时避免句子未完成。

例: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students. Without rules, it would be hard to maintain order and ensure everyone's safety. For example, if students could return to the dormitory anytime, they might stay out late and not get enough rest.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“he teach”应为“he teaches”，以及表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is American and teaches me how to write in English. He is very responsible; whenever I email him, he replies quickly. He also provides detailed feedback on my essays to help me improve.

× There is a rule in the dormitory that students shouldn't back to the dormitory after 11:00 in the evening.

✓ There is a rule in the dormitory that students shouldn't go back to the dormitory after 11:00 in the evening.

动词back后面需要加动词不定式形式go，构成短语go back，表示“返回”。原句中缺少go，导致表达不完整。建议记住常用动词搭配，避免遗漏。

× I think this rule can strongly help the school, ensure the student's security and help maintain the school's order.

✓ I think this rule can strongly help the school, ensure the students' security and help maintain the school's order.

security的所有格应为复数students'，因为指的是所有学生的安全。单数student's表示一个学生的安全，不符合语境。注意复数所有格的正确使用。

× Without rule all the order can be maintained and our security can't be insured as well.

✓ Without rules all the order can be maintained and our security can't be insured as well.

rule应使用复数rules，因为指的是规则的总称。单数rule不符合语境。注意名词单复数的正确使用。

× Without rule all the order can be maintained and our security can't be insured as well.

✓ Without rules all the order can be maintained and our security can't be ensured as well.

这里insure用法不当，应使用ensure表示“确保”。insure通常指保险。注意动词的正确选择。

× For example, if students can back to dormitory whenever they want, they just will hang out all night and don't have any time to.

✓ For example, if students can go back to the dormitory whenever they want, they will just hang out all night and won't have any time to rest.

1. back前缺少go，构成go back短语。2. will和just顺序错误，应为will just。3. don't have any time to后缺少动词，补充rest使句子完整。注意动词搭配和句子完整性。

× He is American and he teach me how to write in English.

✓ He is American and he teaches me how to write in English.

主语he为第三人称单数，谓语动词teach应加-s变为teaches。注意主谓一致。

× He is really responsible every time when I e-mail him he will repeat quickly and I ask him to repeat for my essay.

✓ He is really responsible. Every time when I e-mail him, he will reply quickly and I ask him to review my essay.

1. repeat用法错误，应为reply表示回复。2. 句子过长，建议分句。3. ask him to repeat for my essay表达不清，改为ask him to review my essay更准确。注意动词选择和句子结构。

× He will write very long pages to give me some essential advice.

✓ He writes very long pages to give me some essential advice.

根据上下文，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时writes而非将来时will write。注意时态的正确使用。