Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về các quy định và lý do tại sao chúng quan trọng.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to use phones during class. These rules help maintain discipline and create a focused learning environment.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, if phones are not allowed during lessons, students can concentrate better on their studies and improve their academic performance.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về một giáo viên xuất sắc. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. For example, my math teacher explains difficult concepts clearly and is always patient when students have questions.

× Yes, definitely there are many rules for student at my school.

✓ Yes, definitely there are many rules for students at my school.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to more than one student. In English, countable nouns must agree in number with their quantifiers or determiners.

× For example it is I have to wear uniform when I go to school or I don't allow to use phone.

✓ For example, I have to wear a uniform when I go to school, and I am not allowed to use a phone.

The modal verb 'have to' is used correctly, but 'I don't allow to use phone' is incorrect. The correct passive form is 'I am not allowed to use a phone.' Also, 'uniform' and 'phone' need the article 'a' because they are singular countable nouns.

× Student can gain benefit from rules.

✓ Students can gain benefit from rules.

The noun 'Student' should be plural 'Students' because it refers to students in general. Singular form is incorrect when speaking about a group.

× For instance, when we are not allowed to phone, we can focus on study.

✓ For instance, when we are not allowed to use phones, we can focus on studying.

The verb 'phone' is incorrectly used as a verb here; it should be 'use phones.' Also, 'study' should be in the gerund form 'studying' after 'focus on.'

× I think any teachers in my school is have job very well.

✓ I think the teachers in my school do their job very well.

'Any teachers' is incorrect here; 'the teachers' is appropriate. Also, 'is have job' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'do their job.' Subject-verb agreement and correct verb usage are necessary.