Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive, and some sentences are unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, there were several rules at my school. For example, we had to wear uniforms and be punctual. These rules helped maintain discipline and created a good learning environment.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'for instance' or 'moreover' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about how rules benefit students in daily life.

例: Yes, I believe students benefit from more rules. For instance, rules like wearing uniforms and maintaining silence in class teach discipline, which is useful in daily life and future workplaces.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to focus on one teacher and describe specifically what makes them good, using linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I had a teacher who did her job very well. She taught me patience and confidence, which are important qualities that help me in my studies and future life.

× Yes, I must say when I was in school there were a lot of rules in my school as we had to follow them them in every day, day-to-day life and that are good for us because when we were studying we must have to follow rules and regulation which were used in our.

✓ Yes, I must say when I was in school there were a lot of rules in my school as we had to follow them in everyday, day-to-day life and that was good for us because when we were studying we had to follow rules and regulations which were used in our.

The phrase 'rules and regulation' should be plural as 'rules and regulations' because it refers to multiple rules and regulations. Also, 'that are good' should be 'that was good' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. The repetition of 'them' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'them'. 'Every day' as an adjective should be 'everyday'. The phrase 'must have to follow' is redundant; 'had to follow' is appropriate in past tense.

× Yes, I would say if you follow the rules you feel more beneficial.

✓ Yes, I would say if you follow the rules you feel more benefited.

The adjective 'beneficial' means 'helpful' and is not used to describe feelings. The correct form is 'feel more benefited' to express the effect of following rules. Alternatively, 'feel it is more beneficial' could be used, but here 'feel more benefited' fits better.

× For example when we were in school we follow all the rules like wearing uniform, walking queue and you can make silence in class.

✓ For example, when we were in school we followed all the rules like wearing uniforms, walking in a queue and keeping silence in class.

'Uniform' should be plural as 'uniforms' because it refers to the general concept of wearing school uniforms. 'Walking queue' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'walking in a queue'. 'You can make silence' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keeping silence' or 'being silent'. Also, the tense should be past 'followed' to match 'were in school'.

× That rules can use in day-to-day life in your future and you can learn a lot by following these.

✓ Those rules can be used in day-to-day life in your future and you can learn a lot by following them.

'That rules' is incorrect; it should be 'Those rules' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun. 'Can use' should be passive 'can be used' to indicate the rules are applicable. 'Following these' is better as 'following them' to refer back to 'rules'.

× Yes, I believe all my teachers in my school does their job very well and very appreciating because I learn a lot from them.

✓ Yes, I believe all my teachers in my school do their job very well and are very appreciative because I learn a lot from them.

'Teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' not 'does'. 'Very appreciating' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'very appreciative' to describe the teachers. Also, 'are very appreciative' is needed to form a correct predicate.

× For example, the main thing they taught me is patience and confidence of life which help in our future to get.

✓ For example, the main things they taught me are patience and confidence in life, which help us in our future.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because two items are listed. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Confidence of life' is incorrect; it should be 'confidence in life'. The phrase 'which help in our future to get' is incomplete and awkward; corrected to 'which help us in our future' for clarity and correctness.