Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students should not speak loudly in class, must complete their homework on time, avoid fighting with classmates, and always respect their teachers.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的句子结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Following rules helps them develop good habits both at school and in life. For instance, if they complete their homework on time, they are more likely to get good grades.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和时态，并提供具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I have many teachers who do their jobs well. For example, my English teacher is very active and good at communicating. She has won many awards for her excellent teaching.

× you you you can't speaking loudly

✓ you can't speak loudly

这里动词不能用-ing形式，情态动词后面应接动词原形。

× you should do all your homework at time

✓ you should do all your homework on time

习惯用法中表示“准时”应使用介词'on'，而不是'at'。

× don't fight with your classmate

✓ don't fight with your classmates

这里指的是一般情况，应该用复数形式'classmates'。

× if the student of rules their their rules and they will have many benefits

✓ if the students follow their rules, they will have many benefits

原句中代词使用错误，且表达不清，应使用复数'students'和动词'follow'。

× If they follow the rules, they finish their homework on time, they will get a good grade.

✓ If they follow the rules and finish their homework on time, they will get a good grade.

句子结构不完整，缺少连词'and'连接两个动作。

× I have many teachers do their job very well.

✓ I have many teachers who do their job very well.

缺少关系代词'who'引导定语从句。

× But I want to share one of you, it is my English teacher.

✓ But I want to share one of them, it is my English teacher.

'one of you'指代错误，应为'one of them'指代前文提到的老师。

× She's active Brian and conservation and she did her job very well.

✓ She's active, bright and conservative, and she does her job very well.

形容词拼写错误，且时态应保持一致，'did'改为'does'。

× She have many prize and very good job in her in in her study work.

✓ She has many prizes and does a very good job in her study work.

主谓不一致，'have'应为'has'，且表达更自然需调整句子结构。