Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các quy định của trường.

例: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, we must wear uniforms to ensure everyone is equal. Also, using phones during class is not allowed because it can distract students from learning.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do tại sao thêm quy định có thể giúp học sinh phát triển.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help us learn discipline and responsibility. With more rules, students can discover new skills and grow into mature adults.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nêu tên hoặc mô tả giáo viên và giải thích tại sao bạn nghĩ họ làm việc tốt.

例: Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well. She explains lessons clearly and helps students understand difficult topics.

× Yes, my school has has work is bad.

✓ Yes, my school has rules that are strict.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing due to repetition and incorrect structure. It lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that fits the context.

× For instance we must we must we must wear uniforms to keep everyone equals and this keep it.

✓ For instance, we must wear uniforms to keep everyone equal and maintain discipline.

The original sentence repeats 'we must' unnecessarily and uses 'equals' incorrectly as an adjective. Also, 'this keep it' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction removes repetition, uses 'equal' correctly, and clarifies the meaning.

× But also we we can't use phone in each class because it can.

✓ But also, we can't use phones in each class because they can be distracting.

The original sentence repeats 'we' and uses 'phone' in singular when plural is needed. 'It can' is incomplete and unclear. The correction fixes pronoun number agreement and completes the thought.

× All these cars people will benefit more from more jewels.

✓ All these students will benefit more from more rules.

The original sentence uses 'cars people' and 'jewels' which are incorrect and irrelevant. The correction replaces them with appropriate words matching the context.

× They they will learn. They will learn, discover and and grow and grow up.

✓ They will learn, discover, and grow up.

The original sentence has unnecessary repetition and awkward phrasing. The correction removes repetition and improves fluency.

× To be honest, I I have a teacher, have a job very well and personally I I know I know they teach English in every class as I.

✓ To be honest, I have a teacher who does his job very well, and personally, I know they teach English in every class like me.

The original sentence repeats words and has unclear structure. The correction removes repetition and clarifies meaning with proper relative clauses and pronouns.