Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói rõ ràng về các quy định, đồng thời tránh câu trả lời bị dang dở. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear the correct uniform every day, except on special occasions when sportswear is allowed. These rules help maintain discipline and create a strong sense of unity among students. Additionally, students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teachers.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "have create" và hạn chế tiếng ừ, à. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules create a structured environment. For instance, wearing uniforms promotes unity and reduces distractions. Moreover, clear rules encourage discipline, which helps students focus better and improve their academic performance.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý đến thì động từ (ví dụ: "planned" nên đi với "plan" trong thì hiện tại đơn). Bạn cũng nên sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I have been fortunate to have several teachers who do their jobs very well. They always plan their lessons thoroughly and provide extra help after class, which really helps me understand the material better. Their dedication and careful preparation make learning much easier and more enjoyable.

× For example, is it mandatory for everyone to wear the correct uniform every day except on special occasion when sport wear is alone?

✓ For example, is it mandatory for everyone to wear the correct uniform every day except on special occasions when sportswear is allowed?

The phrase 'on special occasion' should be pluralized to 'on special occasions' to match the context of multiple possible days. Also, 'sport wear is alone' is incorrect; it should be 'sportswear is allowed' to convey the intended meaning. This corrects preposition and word choice errors.

× These regulations help maintain discipline and create strong sense of unity amongst all student.

✓ These regulations help maintain discipline and create a strong sense of unity amongst all students.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'all'. Also, 'strong sense' requires the article 'a' before it. This fixes singular/plural agreement and article usage.

× In addition, students are expected to be.

✓ In addition, students are expected to behave properly.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or complement after 'are expected to be'. Adding 'behave properly' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× rules have create uh, structures, environment.

✓ rules have created, uh, structure and environment.

The verb 'create' should be in the past participle form 'created' to agree with the present perfect tense 'have created'. Also, 'structures, environment' should be singular 'structure and environment' for clarity.

× wearing uniform can promote a sense of unity and reduce distraction among students.

✓ wearing a uniform can promote a sense of unity and reduce distractions among students.

The noun 'uniform' needs the article 'a' before it. Also, 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match the context of multiple possible distractions.

× They always planned their lesson thoroughly and provide extra help after class, which really helped me understand the material better.

✓ They always plan their lessons thoroughly and provide extra help after class, which really helps me understand the material better.

The verbs 'planned' and 'helped' should be in present tense 'plan' and 'helps' to match the habitual action indicated by 'always'. Also, 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to agree with 'their'.