Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“require students don't eat food”应改为“requires students not to eat food”。此外，回答内容较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议加强语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并补充具体原因和影响。

例: Yes, our school has a rule that students are not allowed to eat food in the classroom because it can cause unpleasant smells and distract others. I think this rule helps maintain a clean and comfortable learning environment.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“distract student plans”应为“interfere with students' plans”，且例子表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，明确表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更连贯。

例: Actually, I don't think having more rules would benefit students because too many rules can interfere with their plans. For example, I like to study in the evening, but sometimes the library is closed early, which limits my study time.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，缺少完整的句子结构和具体细节。建议学习正确的时态和句型，清楚描述老师的行为和特点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Yes, I remember a teacher who always gets up early and arrives at the classroom before the students. This shows his dedication and responsibility towards his job.

× Yes, I our school often require students don't eat food in the classroom because it will smell badly for us.

✓ Yes, our school often requires students not to eat food in the classroom because it will smell bad for us.

这里'school'是单数，谓语动词'require'应使用第三人称单数形式'requires'。此外，'students don't eat'结构不正确，应改为'not to eat'表示禁止。'smell badly'应改为'smell bad'，因为'smell'是感官动词，后面接形容词。

× I think it is a good route for us.

✓ I think it is a good rule for us.

'route'是路线的意思，语境中应为'规则'，正确单词是'rule'。

× Actually, I don't think so, because so many rules will distract student plans.

✓ Actually, I don't think so, because so many rules will distract students' plans.

'student'应为复数形式'students'，且表示所属关系，应加所有格's'，即'students' plans'。

× For example when I want to amend in the evening but our library often closed in.

✓ For example, when I want to study in the evening, but our library is often closed.

'amend'用词不当，应为'study'。'closed in'结构错误，应为被动语态'is closed'。

× Yes, in my memory a teacher who is often get up early and go to the classroom very early and before my our student.

✓ Yes, I remember a teacher who often gets up early and goes to the classroom very early, before our students.

'get'和'go'应使用第三人称单数形式'gets'和'goes'，因为主语是单数'teacher'。'in my memory'表达不自然，改为'I remember'。'my our student'重复且错误，应为'our students'。