Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız genel olarak iyi, ancak daha doğal ve akıcı olması için cümle yapılarınızı çeşitlendirebilir ve bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, detayları biraz daha spesifik hale getirerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, we have to wear a uniform every day, which helps create a sense of unity. Moreover, completing homework on time is mandatory to keep up with the lessons.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve ifade biraz doğal değil. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak düşüncenizi daha etkili ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: No, I don't think more rules would help. Actually, I believe students need some freedom to develop their creativity and responsibility.

提案: Cümleniz açık ancak daha doğal ve etkili olması için bağlaçlar kullanabilir ve ifadelerinizi biraz daha detaylandırabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I have a chemistry teacher who does her job very well. She explains difficult concepts clearly, which helps me understand the subject better. I really appreciate her teaching style.

× At my school we need to wear uniform every school day and we need to do our homework on time.

✓ At my school we need to wear uniforms every school day and we need to do our homework on time.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students, not just one. In English, when talking about items used by multiple people, the plural form is used.

× I think that students are need to be free actually.

✓ I think that students need to be free actually.

The phrase 'are need to' is incorrect. The correct modal verb usage is 'need to' without 'are'. Modal verbs like 'need to' do not require auxiliary verbs like 'are' before them.