Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Use plural forms correctly (e.g., 'students' instead of 'student') and avoid run-on sentences by using proper linking words. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

例: Yes, there are several important rules at my school. For example, students must wear the prescribed uniform to maintain discipline and equality. Moreover, the school is very strict about attendance and punctuality to ensure that students attend classes regularly.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence clarity by using linking words like 'because' and 'which'. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific.

例: Yes, I believe that students would benefit from more rules because they provide structure and discipline, which help students focus better on their studies.

提案: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use singular or plural forms consistently and improve sentence flow with linking words. Also, try to explain how the teacher teaches effectively with specific details.

例: Yes, my math teacher teaches very well. He explains difficult concepts in an easy way, so all students can understand them easily.

× Yes, there are several important rules at my school like wearing prescribed uniform to maintain discipline and equality among the student.

✓ Yes, there are several important rules at my school like wearing prescribed uniforms to maintain discipline and equality among the students.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the general rule about wearing uniforms, not just one. Similarly, 'student' should be plural 'students' as it refers to all students collectively. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× They are very strict towards the attendance and punctuality to ensure that the student attend the class regularly.

✓ They are very strict towards attendance and punctuality to ensure that the students attend the class regularly.

'The student' should be plural 'the students' because it refers to all students. Also, 'attend' should agree with plural subject 'students'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Yes, I believe that student would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provide to structure and discipline to the student which help them more focus to their studies.

✓ Yes, I believe that students would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provided to structure and discipline the students which help them focus more on their studies.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer to all students. 'Provide' should be 'provided' (past participle) but that is another issue. 'The student' should be 'the students'. Also, 'help them more focus to their studies' is corrected to 'help them focus more on their studies' for proper verb and preposition usage. This correction focuses on singular/plural issues.

× Yes, I believe that student would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provide to structure and discipline to the student which help them more focus to their studies.

✓ Yes, I believe that students would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provided to structure and discipline the students which help them focus more on their studies.

'Provide' should be 'provided' as it is used in passive voice here, requiring past participle form. This is a past tense issue.

× Yes, I believe that student would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provide to structure and discipline to the student which help them more focus to their studies.

✓ Yes, I believe that students would gain a lot from more guidelines because rules are provided to structure and discipline the students which help them focus more on their studies.

'Discipline to the student' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted or 'discipline the students'. Also, 'focus to their studies' should be 'focus on their studies'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× Yes, my math teacher is good at teaching. They clear the concept hard to easy way to the student and all student can easily understand it.

✓ Yes, my math teacher is good at teaching. He clears the concepts from hard to easy ways to the students and all students can easily understand it.

'They' is used for singular 'my math teacher' which is incorrect; it should be 'he' or 'she'. 'Clear' should be 'clears' to agree with third person singular. 'Concept' should be plural 'concepts' as multiple concepts are implied. 'Hard to easy way' should be 'from hard to easy ways'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. This is a singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issue.

× Yes, my math teacher is good at teaching. They clear the concept hard to easy way to the student and all student can easily understand it.

✓ Yes, my math teacher is good at teaching. He clears the concepts from hard to easy ways to the students and all students can easily understand it.

'Clear' should be 'clears' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my math teacher'. Also, 'They' should be replaced with 'He' or 'She' to match singular subject. This is a third person singular issue.