Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, from my school we have any rules. For example student must use uniform and then use mobile phone went at the school.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
I think many of us is not gold because can make students feel stressed, but some rules make students discipline so I think enough rules is better.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes I have it is my homeroom teacher and he is academic teacher. He always explain with clearly and if someone student don't understand he explain again and patiently clear.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly state the rules and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to use mobile phones during lessons.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
例: I believe that having too many rules can make students feel stressed. However, some rules are necessary to help students develop discipline, so I think having a reasonable number of rules is best.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.
例: Yes, my homeroom teacher is very good at his job. He explains lessons clearly, and if a student does not understand, he patiently explains again until everyone understands.
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