Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. For example, 'there are' should be 'there were' to match past tense, and 'important' is repeated. Also, you should use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to make your answer more natural and concise by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition.

例: When I was in middle school, there were several important rules for students. For instance, we had to wear a school uniform every day, and we were expected to behave respectfully towards teachers and classmates.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammar errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'student would be benefit' should be 'students would benefit', and 'management time' should be 'managing time'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly to make your answer coherent. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them understand their responsibilities better. For example, rules about respecting others and managing time can improve both their learning and social skills.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. You should respond directly to the question with a full sentence and provide supporting details. For example, mention a specific teacher and explain why you think they do their job well, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. For instance, my English teacher is very patient and explains difficult topics clearly, which helps me understand better.

× When I was in middle school, there are several important important rules for students.

✓ When I was in middle school, there were several important rules for students.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was in middle school'), so the verb 'are' (present tense) is incorrect. It should be 'were' to match the past tense context. Also, 'important' is repeated twice, so one should be removed.

× we had to wear a school uniform every day and we are expected to behave respectfully.

✓ we had to wear a school uniform every day and we were expected to behave respectfully.

The sentence describes past expectations, so 'are expected' (present tense) should be changed to 'were expected' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, I believe student would be benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them understand their responsibility better.

✓ Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them understand their responsibilities better.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'them' later in the sentence. 'Would be benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'would benefit'. Also, 'responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match 'them'.

× For example, rules about respecting others and management time can improve both their learning and social.

✓ For example, rules about respecting others and managing time can improve both their learning and social skills.

'Management time' is incorrect; it should be 'managing time' (verb + -ing form). Also, 'social' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify, so 'social skills' is appropriate.

× When I have.

✓ Yes, I do.

'When I have.' is an incomplete sentence and does not answer the question properly. A complete and appropriate response is 'Yes, I do.'