Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, there are several rules in different aspects for students at our school. For example, the rules about impitting our homework every day. And we also have rules that we should respect our teachers and fellow students to keep our campus a positive atmosphere.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
To some degrees, I agree with the opinion. Students can be more disciplined and positive through its own good rules. For example, they can be more respectful to our teachers and fellow students if they follow the rules, and they can be more concentrated on their homework.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes, my English teacher who really do art good job in her work. For example she brought us many knowledge about English and helped us gain high grade on our examinations.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（"impitting"应为"submitting"），且句子结构不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免句子碎片化。可以尝试将信息整合成更流畅的句子。
例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we must submit our homework every day, and we are expected to respect our teachers and classmates to maintain a positive atmosphere on campus.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法错误（如"its own good rules"应为"good rules"），建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: To some extent, I agree with this opinion because good rules can help students become more disciplined and positive. For instance, following rules encourages respect towards teachers and classmates, and helps students focus better on their homework.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误（如"who really do art good job"应为"who really does a good job"），表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和正确使用冠词，同时丰富细节描述。
例: Yes, my English teacher does a great job. For example, she teaches us a lot of useful English knowledge and helps us improve our grades in exams.
文法
× For example, the rules about impitting our homework every day.
✓ For example, the rules about submitting our homework every day.
句中单词'impitting'拼写错误，应为'submitting'，表示提交作业。此处应使用动名词形式作为介词'about'的宾语。
× And we also have rules that we should respect our teachers and fellow students to keep our campus a positive atmosphere.
✓ And we also have rules that we should respect our teachers and fellow students to keep a positive atmosphere on our campus.
句子中'keep our campus a positive atmosphere'结构不自然，应该改为'keep a positive atmosphere on our campus'，使表达更符合英语习惯。
× Students can be more disciplined and positive through its own good rules.
✓ Students can be more disciplined and positive through their own good rules.
'Students'是复数，指代的物主代词应为'their'，而不是单数的'its'。
× For example, they can be more respectful to our teachers and fellow students if they follow the rules, and they can be more concentrated on their homework.
✓ For example, they can be more respectful to our teachers and fellow students if they follow the rules, and they can concentrate more on their homework.
'Concentrated'是形容词，表达专注的状态。此处应使用动词'concentrate'，并将副词'more'放在动词后，表达'更加专注'。
× Yes, my English teacher who really do art good job in her work.
✓ Yes, my English teacher who really does a good job in her work.
主语是单数的'my English teacher'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'does'。另外，'do art good job'拼写错误，应为'does a good job'。
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