Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中有重复表达“definitely yes, there are definitely”，显得不够自然。建议避免重复，回答时直接切入主题，并且可以增加一些具体细节使内容更丰富。

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must eat breakfast by 7:00 AM and have lunch at noon to keep a healthy schedule. Moreover, there are study guidelines that encourage us to concentrate and finish our homework on time.

提案: 回答较为完整，但开头的感叹词“Wow”显得不够正式。建议开头直接表达观点，并且“more regulation”应改为“more rules”以保持用词一致。

例: I believe that having more rules would benefit students because many struggle to manage their behavior. For example, clear rules create a better learning environment and help students concentrate on their studies. Therefore, schools should introduce additional rules to promote discipline.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“he understand”应为“he understands”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意语法一致性，句子完整，并且增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my English teacher Peter does his job very well because he understands that many students struggle with presentations. For example, he assigns special tasks unrelated to presentations to help us build confidence and improve our speaking skills. Thanks to his support, I have become much more confident in speaking.

× My English teacher Peter does his job very well because he understand that many students struggle with presentations.

✓ My English teacher Peter does his job very well because he understands that many students struggle with presentations.

主谓一致错误。主语是第三人称单数he，谓语动词应加-s，变为understands。

× Thanks to his support, I felt a much more.

✓ Thanks to his support, I felt much better.

量词使用错误。短语“a much more”不完整且不合适，应该用“much better”表示感觉更好。