Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, of course. For example, students have to come to the school with their school uniform. I strongly believe that these rules are keeping students in order and they make students life better.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
From my perspective, that's a little bit wrong because if you're going to put rules for everything, it would make students life boring and they cannot focus on learning their lessons.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes, I do have one teacher like that. He was my English teacher, he was disciplined and he were putting rules in our class to make us focus on his lesson more. In general, I really like him as my English teacher.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 75.0提案: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "Students life" ifadesi yerine "students' lives" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar ekleyebilirsiniz.
例: Yes, of course. For example, students have to wear their school uniforms. I strongly believe that these rules help keep students in order and, as a result, improve their school life.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınızda anlam açık ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı geliştirilmelidir. "Students life" yerine "students' lives" kullanılmalı ve cümleler daha doğal hale getirilmelidir. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizin akıcılığını artırabilirsiniz.
例: From my perspective, I think adding too many rules is not beneficial because it would make students' lives boring, and they might find it hard to focus on their lessons.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları var, özellikle "he were" yerine "he was" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.
例: Yes, I have a teacher like that. He was my English teacher, and he was very disciplined. He set clear rules in our class to help us focus better on his lessons. Overall, I really liked him as my teacher.
文法
× I strongly believe that these rules are keeping students in order and they make students life better.
✓ I strongly believe that these rules are keeping students in order and they make students' lives better.
The phrase 'students life' is incorrect because 'students' is plural and needs a possessive form to show ownership. The correct form is 'students' lives' to indicate the lives belonging to multiple students.
× if you're going to put rules for everything, it would make students life boring and they cannot focus on learning their lessons.
✓ if you're going to put rules for everything, it would make students' lives boring and they cannot focus on learning their lessons.
Similar to the previous error, 'students life' should be 'students' lives' to correctly show possession for multiple students.
× He was my English teacher, he was disciplined and he were putting rules in our class to make us focus on his lesson more.
✓ He was my English teacher, he was disciplined and he was putting rules in our class to make us focus on his lesson more.
The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'he'. The correct singular form is 'was' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
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