Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the students can say The Dirty word”表达不清晰且含义相反。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免重复。

例: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use bad language, and if they do, teachers will punish them.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because when they are young, they don't know much and often make mistakes. Therefore, having rules can help guide them to behave better.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“is do his job”应为“does his job”，且句子不完整。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，并提供更具体的细节。

例: I think my junior high school teacher does his job very well because he teaches me what I can and cannot do. For example, he does not allow students to talk during lessons to keep the class focused.

× Yes, there are many many rules for student at my school.

✓ Yes, there are many many rules for students at my school.

这里的'student'应该用复数形式'students'，因为前面说的是很多规则，针对的是多个学生。名词的单复数要和句意保持一致。

× For example, the students can say The Dirty word.

✓ For example, the students can say dirty words.

这里不需要使用定冠词'the'，而且'dirty word'应为复数形式'dirty words'，表示脏话的泛指。

× If you say The Dirty word, the teacher will punish you.

✓ If you say dirty words, the teacher will punish you.

同上，'dirty words'应为复数，且不需要定冠词。

× Yes, because when the students young they don't know so much things so they often do they often did something wrong.

✓ Yes, because when students are young they don't know so many things so they often do something wrong.

'students'前不需要定冠词'the'，'so much things'应改为'so many things'，因为'things'是可数名词，数量词要用'many'。

× Yes, because when the students young they don't know so much things so they often do they often did something wrong.

✓ Yes, because when students are young they don't know so many things so they often do something wrong.

句中'they often did something wrong'时态不一致，应保持现在时态'do'，因为前面是一般现在时。

× So if you have some rules can make student be good.

✓ So if you have some rules, it can make students be good.

'student'应为复数'students'，且句子缺少主语，添加'it'使句子完整。

× So if you have some rules can make student be good.

✓ So if you have some rules, it can make students behave well.

原句缺少主语和谓语之间的连接词，且表达不够自然，改为'it can make students behave well'更通顺。

× I think my junior high school teacher is do his job very well because he he teach me what can do and what can't.

✓ I think my junior high school teacher does his job very well because he teaches me what I can do and what I can't.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'does'和'teaches'。

× I think my junior high school teacher is do his job very well because he he teach me what can do and what can't.

✓ I think my junior high school teacher does his job very well because he teaches me what I can do and what I can't.

缺少主语'I'，导致句子不完整，需补充。

× For example he don't allow me talking.

✓ For example, he doesn't allow me to talk.

主语是第三人称单数，助动词应为'doesn't'，且动词后应接不定式'to talk'，而不是动名词'talking'。