Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“those rules is”应为“those rules are”，且表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并补充具体例子以增强内容的丰富性。

例: Yes, there are strict rules at my school and university. For example, students must attend classes on time and avoid using phones during lessons. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误，如“send more rulers”应为“have more rules”，“stretch their behavior”表达不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用词汇，并提供具体理由。

例: I think it depends on the students' age. Younger students need more rules to guide their behavior, but older students should have more freedom to make their own decisions.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，句子不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议先明确表达观点，然后用连词连接具体例子，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I have several excellent teachers. They organize our study schedule well and give us useful advice whenever we have questions.

× ...but I think those rules is well set because they can limit the students behavior to prevent them from some.

✓ ...but I think those rules are well set because they can limit the students' behavior to prevent them from some.

主语是复数形式的"rules"，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"，而不是单数形式"is"。此外，"students behavior"缺少所有格，应改为"students' behavior"。

× ...because they can limit the students behavior to prevent them from some.

✓ ...because they can limit the students' behavior to prevent them from some mistakes.

短语"prevent them from some"不完整，缺少具体内容。应补充具体名词，如"some mistakes"，使句子完整。

× For younger students it is necessary to send more rulers for them to stretch their behavior.

✓ For younger students it is necessary to set more rules for them to regulate their behavior.

"send more rulers"用词错误，应为"set more rules"。"rulers"指统治者，不符合语境。

× But if the student is older, I think they are don't need too many rulers online.

✓ But if the student is older, I think they don't need too many rules online.

"they are don't need"语法错误，应为"they don't need"。此外，"rulers"应为"rules"。

× Definitely, I have several teachers that teach us very good and because they usually have a schedule for our studies process and give our you ask appropriate advice for any.

✓ Definitely, I have several teachers who teach us very well because they usually have a schedule for our study process and give us appropriate advice for anything.

"teach us very good"中"good"应为副词形式"well"。"that"指人时用"who"更合适。"our studies process"应为"our study process"。"give our you ask appropriate advice for any"语序混乱，应改为"give us appropriate advice for anything"。