Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "every school in Vietnam have a rules", bạn nên nói "every school in Vietnam has a rule". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài và tập trung vào câu hỏi.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear uniforms when they attend classes. These rules help maintain discipline and a sense of unity among students.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì "students have a benefit from rules", bạn nên nói "students benefit from rules". Ngoài ra, câu ví dụ nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "may have students to make decisions".

例: Yes, I believe students benefit from having rules because they help develop discipline and self-awareness. For instance, clear guidelines teach students how to distinguish right from wrong.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ. Ví dụ, thay vì "I really lucky", bạn nên nói "I am really lucky". Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên được viết lại cho rõ nghĩa và chính xác hơn.

例: Absolutely yes. I am really lucky to have met my high school teacher. She is a dedicated and hardworking person who always helps her students achieve success.

× For example, every school in Vietnam have a rules that require students have to wear uniform when they come to university.

✓ For example, every school in Vietnam has a rule that requires students to wear a uniform when they come to university.

The subject 'every school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'a rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural; it should be 'a rule' (singular) to match 'every school'. Additionally, 'require students have to wear' is incorrect; it should be 'requires students to wear' to use the correct verb form and infinitive. Finally, 'uniform' should be preceded by 'a' as it is a countable noun here.

× For example, every school in Vietnam have a rules that require students have to wear uniform when they come to university.

✓ For example, every school in Vietnam has a rule that requires students to wear a uniform when they come to university.

The phrase 'require students have to wear' is incorrect because 'have to' is a modal-like expression and should not be combined directly with 'require'. The correct form is 'requires students to wear' using the infinitive form after 'require'.

× Yes, I think students have a benefit from rules because they can develop their discipline and self-awareness.

✓ Yes, I think students benefit from rules because they can develop their discipline and self-awareness.

The phrase 'have a benefit' is incorrect because 'benefit' here is used as a verb, not a noun. The correct form is 'students benefit from rules'. Using 'have a benefit' is unnatural and grammatically incorrect in this context.

× For example, the clear guidelines may have students to make decisions how to right and wrong.

✓ For example, the clear guidelines may help students make decisions about what is right and wrong.

The phrase 'have students to make decisions' is incorrect; the verb 'have' does not take an infinitive here. 'Help students make' is the correct structure. Also, 'decisions how to right and wrong' is incorrect; it should be 'decisions about what is right and wrong' to use the correct preposition and phrasing.

× She's a dedicated and hardworking teacher that always that always have student achieve their success.

✓ She's a dedicated and hardworking teacher who always helps students achieve their success.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' or better replaced with 'helps' to fit the meaning. Also, 'teacher that' should be 'teacher who' because 'who' refers to people. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The repeated phrase 'that always' is a redundancy and should be corrected.