Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, of course. There are so many rules for students at my school. Like for example, students have to wear uniform at school and they have to go to school on time, and in Vietnamese we have to go school at 7:00. I think there's a option.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Actually, I think it's really helpful for every children, especially a student in a young age, because it will have them to have a discipline and answer that everyone can focus on learning.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes, of course umm I would like to talk about my old Japanese teacher when I learn in umm language centre sees well, she sees such a good teacher for me because she's not only teaching me umm about learning, but also.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'there's a option' nên là 'there is an option'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and arrive by 7:00 AM. These rules help maintain discipline and punctuality.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ 'it will have them to have a discipline' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy chú ý sử dụng danh từ số nhiều đúng cách và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
例: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students, especially young ones, because they help develop discipline and create an environment where everyone can focus on learning.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều từ thừa như 'umm' gây mất tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết. Hãy tập trung vào việc mô tả cụ thể về giáo viên và lý do tại sao bạn đánh giá cao cô ấy.
例: Yes, I had a Japanese teacher at a language centre who was excellent. She not only taught the language effectively but also encouraged me to be confident and motivated in learning.
文法
× students have to wear uniform at school
✓ students have to wear a uniform at school
In English, 'wear uniform' requires an article before 'uniform' because 'uniform' is a countable noun in this context. The correct phrase is 'wear a uniform'.
× in Vietnamese we have to go school at 7:00
✓ in Vietnamese we have to go to school at 7:00
The verb 'go' when followed by a place requires the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go to school'.
× I think there's a option
✓ I think there's an option
The word 'option' begins with a vowel sound, so the indefinite article should be 'an' instead of 'a'.
× it's really helpful for every children
✓ it's really helpful for every child
The word 'every' is used with singular countable nouns, so 'children' (plural) should be changed to 'child' (singular).
× especially a student in a young age
✓ especially students at a young age
The phrase 'a student in a young age' is incorrect. 'Students' should be plural to match 'every children' context, and the correct preposition is 'at' for age expressions: 'at a young age'.
× because it will have them to have a discipline and answer that everyone can focus on learning
✓ because it will help them to have discipline and ensure that everyone can focus on learning
The original sentence has incorrect verb usage and unclear meaning. 'Have them to have a discipline' is incorrect; it should be 'help them to have discipline'. Also, 'answer that' is incorrect; 'ensure that' fits better to express the intended meaning.
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