Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接表达了喜欢买鞋以及购买频率，但后两句存在严重的词汇和表达问题，影响了意思的清晰度，例如“give a hand still”“board Italy”和“send Jesu”都不符合语境。建议使用简单、准确的句子说明购买原因，并用“because”连接细节。注意控制在2—3句，避免加入无法准确表达的内容。

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I only buy a new pair a few times a year. I usually get them when I see a good design in a shop or when my old shoes are worn out. It makes my everyday outfits look more interesting.

提案: 回答了问题，但句子之间缺少标点和连接词，且“like try”应改为“like trying”，“latest stale”应为“latest styles”。“always”与“try new things”的表达略显重复，建议先直接回答，再说明网上购物方便、款式多等具体原因。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. I like trying new styles, and online shopping is very convenient for me. There are usually more choices and the latest styles available on those websites.

提案: 回答基本表达了自己不会在鞋子上花太多钱，也提到了舒适度和耐用性，这是比较好的细节。不过“never spend the much”应改为“don’t spend that much”，“the reasonable price”应改为“a reasonable price”，“repeatable store”意思不清。建议给出大致金额或价格范围，并使用“because”说明原因。

例: I usually spend about 50 to 80 dollars on a pair of shoes. I don’t spend too much because I care more about comfort and durability than brand names. In my experience, you can find good-quality shoes at a reasonable price in many regular stores.

提案: 观点是明确的：你更喜欢舒适的鞋子，也提供了父母建议这一理由。但开头“Only exact perfect comfortable shoes”不自然，最后一句“the and the two pair”无法理解。建议使用“I prefer comfortable shoes”，然后解释日常穿着需要走路，并补充一个具体结果，例如减少脚痛。

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes, especially for everyday use. My parents always remind me to choose shoes that are good for my feet, and I think they are right. Comfortable shoes allow me to walk for a long time without getting sore feet.

× I like try new things.

✓ I like trying new things.

在动词 like 后面表示“喜欢做某事”时，通常使用动名词形式，即 like + 动词-ing。应将 try 改为 trying。也可以说 I like to try new things，但在本句中使用 trying 更自然。

× I always buy shoes online I like trying new things.

✓ I always buy shoes online because I like trying new things.

原句包含两个完整的分句，中间缺少连接词，造成句子连接错误。这里前后是因果关系，因此使用 because 连接，表示“因为我喜欢尝试新事物”。

× Yes, of course I always buy shoes online I like try new things and online shopping for shoes really suits me It's they are always the latest stale available on those websites.

✓ Yes, of course. I always buy shoes online because I like trying new things, and online shopping for shoes really suits me. They are always the latest styles available on those websites.

原句把多个完整句子直接连在一起，缺少句号、逗号或连词，导致句子结构混乱。应将内容拆分成几个完整句子，并使用 because 和 and 表达逻辑关系。

× I never spend the much on shoes.

✓ I never spend that much on shoes.

much 前面不能使用 the 表示“那么多”。表示“那么多钱”时，应使用 that much。固定表达是 spend that much on something。

× You can find good quality shoes at the reasonable price.

✓ You can find good-quality shoes at a reasonable price.

price 是可数名词单数，第一次提到某个合理价格时，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是定冠词 the。正确搭配是 at a reasonable price，意思是“以合理的价格”。

× You can find good quality shoes at a reasonable price for repeatable store.

✓ You can find good-quality shoes at a reasonable price in reputable stores.

表示“在商店里”通常使用介词 in，而不是 for。stores 是复数，表示泛指多个商店时不需要冠词。这里应使用 in reputable stores，意思是“在信誉良好的商店里”。

× Only exact perfect comfortable shoes especially for daily life.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes, especially for daily life.

原句没有谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。回答“你更喜欢哪一种鞋”时，需要使用 prefer 作为谓语。comfortable shoes 已经表达清楚意思，因此不需要在前面堆叠多个形容词。

× Exact perfect comfortable shoes.

✓ Perfectly comfortable shoes.

多个形容词同时修饰名词时，需要遵循较自然的排列顺序。表示“非常舒适的”时，perfectly 是副词，应放在 comfortable 前面；但在本题中，直接说 comfortable shoes 更自然。

× The two pair they are right.

✓ The two pairs are right.

two 后面必须接可数名词复数，因此 pair 应改为 pairs。另外，the two pairs 已经是主语，不需要再重复使用代词 they。