Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer both parts of the question directly. State whether you like buying shoes and explain how often you buy them. Avoid repeating the same phrase, and use the natural expression “buy shoes” instead of repeating “need shoes.” Add a specific frequency or reason to make the answer more complete.

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I only buy them when I need a new pair. I usually shop for shoes once or twice a year, especially when my old ones are worn out.

提案: Use the present perfect structure “Yes, I have” to answer an experience question. Then explain where and how often you shop online. Use clear vocabulary such as “buy shoes online” and “from Myntra,” and avoid unclear words like “Suzba.”

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. I usually shop on Myntra because it has a wide range of styles and often offers good discounts.

提案: Use the correct structure “I spend...” rather than “There are few money.” Give an approximate amount and explain why you spend that amount. Also, use “rarely buy shoes” or “don’t buy shoes very often” instead of “rare like shoes.”

例: I usually spend around 40 or 50 dollars on a pair of shoes. I don’t spend much because I rarely buy shoes and prefer to use the pairs I already have.

提案: Give a clear preference and one or two logical reasons. Avoid repeating “comfortable” and replace the unclear phrase “comfortable join” with a specific reason, such as being able to walk easily or wear the shoes for a long time. Use a linking word like “because” to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot during the day. Although fashionable shoes look attractive, comfortable shoes are more practical and allow me to wear them for several hours without discomfort.

× Yes, I like bai sues whenever I need a bai sues.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes whenever I need a pair of shoes.

The phrase a pair of shoes is used because shoes are normally referred to as a pair. The singular article a cannot be used directly before the plural noun shoes. Use a pair of shoes when you mean two matching shoes.

× Yes, I am sometime Suzba online in Mintra.

✓ Yes, I have sometimes bought shoes online at Myntra.

The question uses the present perfect form Have you ever bought, so the answer should also use have bought. Sometimes is the correct adverb, not sometime. Use at with a shopping website or platform, and place sometimes before the past participle: have sometimes bought.

× There are few money I spend in shoes because I rare like shoes.

✓ I spend little money on shoes because I rarely buy shoes.

Money is an uncountable noun, so use little money, not few money. The sentence does not need there are; use the direct subject I. Use spend money on something, not spend money in something. Rarely is the adverb form needed before the verb, and buy shoes is more natural than like shoes when explaining how little money you spend on shoes.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I need a I like comfortable join.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I need and like comfortable shoes.

The ideas need to be connected with the conjunction and. The article a is incorrect before the plural noun shoes and should be removed. When two verbs share the same object, you can say need and like comfortable shoes.