Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn với câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, và tránh lặp từ. Nên nêu tần suất cụ thể (ví dụ: every few months), lý do rõ ràng và một chi tiết hỗ trợ. Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I do. I usually buy new shoes every few months because my old ones wear out. For example, I replace my everyday sneakers about every three to four months if they become uncomfortable, so I shop regularly to keep a comfortable pair.

提案: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm (have bought, convenient), tránh tiếng lòng vòng (uh) và dùng từ chính xác. Trình bày lý do rõ ràng và nêu một ví dụ cụ thể về trải nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. I ordered a pair of sneakers because it was very convenient and there were many choices, so I could compare prices and reviews easily. For instance, I read several customer reviews before choosing a size that fit me well.

提案: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ và làm rõ đơn vị tiền tệ (VND). Có thể mở rộng bằng cách nêu ví dụ về chất lượng hoặc nơi mua để cụ thể hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: I usually spend around 1,000,000 VND on a pair of shoes. I mainly buy sneakers for everyday use because I prefer comfort and decent quality rather than expensive brands. For example, I often buy from a local store that offers durable soles and good cushioning.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (comfortable, 'fashionable shoes'), tránh lỗi nói lắp (soup). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và cho ví dụ về tình huống bạn ưu tiên sự thoải mái.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for long periods, such as when I go to school and work. For example, I choose sneakers with good arch support so I can stand or walk all day without discomfort, although I sometimes buy fashionable shoes for special occasions.

× Oh yes I do actually I like buying shoes because I often every few months.

✓ Oh yes, I do. Actually, I like buying shoes because I often buy them every few months.

The sentence missing the main verb for the clause 'I often every few months'. The present simple is required to express habitual action: 'I often buy them every few months'. Also punctuation and pronoun 'them' clarify the object.

× I often buy shoes when my old shoes weigh out and I need a new pair and comfortable shoes.

✓ I often buy shoes when my old shoes wear out and I need a new pair of comfortable shoes.

The student used 'weigh out' which is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'wear out' (present simple) to describe items becoming unusable. Also add 'of' in 'pair of comfortable shoes' to form the correct noun phrase.

× Uh, yes I have I want bought a pair of sneakers online because I feel it very convenient and there were many soon uh, I could also compare bright easily.

✓ Uh, yes I have. I once bought a pair of sneakers online because I felt it was very convenient and there were many options; I could also compare prices easily.

Multiple issues: 'I want bought' is incorrect; use simple past 'I once bought' to refer to a completed action. 'I feel it very convenient' should be past 'I felt it was very convenient' to match past tense. 'many soon' is likely 'many options' and 'compare bright' should be 'compare prices' or 'compare products'. Ensure consistent tense and correct vocabulary.

× I always check the site carefully.

✓ I always check the site carefully.

This sentence is correct grammatically; it appropriately uses the present simple for habitual action. No change required.

× I usually spend around 1,000,000 Vietnam on a pair of shoes.

✓ I usually spend around 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes.

Currency name should be 'Vietnamese dong' or 'VND'. Using 'Vietnam' is incorrect. Keep the present simple 'usually spend' for habitual action.

× I normally buy sneakers for everyday use.

✓ I normally buy sneakers for everyday use.

This sentence is correct; 'everyday' used as an adjective before 'use' is acceptable. No grammar change needed.

× I don't need expensive brand, I want something comfortable and good quality.

✓ I don't need an expensive brand; I want something comfortable and of good quality.

Missing article 'an' before 'expensive brand' and 'of' before 'good quality' to form the correct noun phrase. Also use a semicolon or period to separate clauses.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually wear them for a long time.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually wear them for long periods of time.

Original is understandable, but 'for a long time' is fine; however 'for long periods of time' sounds more natural when referring to regular extended use. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammar correction.

× I often go to school and I go to work because I need to comfortable.

✓ I often go to school and to work, so I need shoes that are comfortable.

The phrase 'need to comfortable' is ungrammatical. Use 'need shoes that are comfortable' or 'need to be comfortable' with correct clause structure. Also combine parallel verbs 'go to school and to work'.

× Of course, I like fashionable soup too, but comfort is more important to me.

✓ Of course, I like fashionable shoes too, but comfort is more important to me.

'soup' is a vocabulary error for 'shoes'. Replace with correct noun 'shoes'. The rest is grammatically correct.