Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha açık ve düzgün dilbilgisi ile verilmelidir. Konu cümlesini net kurun, sonra hangi sıklıkta aldığınızı belirtin ve gerekirse nedenini bir veya iki destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın. Kelime seçiminde tutarlılık (sneakers -> shoes) ve sayı kullanırken tam ifadeler (twice a year) kullanın.

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they can improve an outfit. I usually buy new shoes twice a year, mainly when my old pairs wear out or when there is a sale. I prefer practical designs that match several outfits so I get good value.

提案: Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve daha akıcı bağlaçlar kullanın. Net bir konu cümlesi kurup tercih nedeninizi açıklayın ve bir örnek veya kısa sonuç ekleyin. 'Because' ile neden belirtirken cümlenin tamamını doğru kurun ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

例: Sometimes I buy shoes online, but I prefer going to the mall to try them on because online orders often have sizing issues. For example, I once had to return a pair that was too small, so now I try to check sizes carefully before buying online.

提案: Fiyatları ifade ederken zaman ve miktar uyumuna dikkat edin ve daha doğru İngilizce kullanın. İlk cümlede tipik harcamanızı belirtin, sonra indirimlerden bahsedin ve somut bir örnek verin. Sayıları ve para birimini düzgün yazın ve geçmiş olay için past tense kullanın.

例: I usually spend about 600 Turkish lira on a pair of shoes, but I sometimes buy them on sale, which reduces the price. For example, my last pair cost only 200 lira during a seasonal discount.

提案: Cevabı net ve doğal bir cümleyle ifade edin: tercihinizi söyleyin, ardından nedenini iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Grameri düzeltin (özne-yüklem uyumu) ve bağlaç kullanın. Mümkünse bir kısa örnek ekleyin.

例: I prefer shoes that are both comfortable and stylish because I wear them for long periods. For instance, I choose sneakers that support my feet but also match my daily outfits.

× Yes I like buying shoes because if you have a good sneakers your outfit looking good better.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes because if you have good sneakers your outfit looks better.

The errors involve adjective/adverb use and subject-verb agreement. 'a good sneakers' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'good sneakers'. 'your outfit looking good better' is ungrammatical: use present simple 'your outfit looks better'. Suggestion: match number between article and noun, and use correct verb form for present simple.

× I'm buying shoes 2 I use.

✓ I buy shoes for when I need them.

This sentence is scrambled and lacks clear structure. '2' and 'I use' seem to try to express purpose or frequency. Use a clear present simple phrase for habitual action: 'I buy shoes for when I need them' or 'I buy shoes when I need them'. Suggestion: state frequency or purpose clearly, keep verb in present simple for habits.

× Sometimes, but I prefer go to the mall and try because in online sometimes I'm buying wrong size.

✓ Sometimes, but I prefer to go to the mall and try them on because online sometimes I buy the wrong size.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'prefer go' requires 'prefer to go'; 'try' needs object 'them on' for shoes; 'in online' is incorrect preposition and order — use 'online'; 'I'm buying wrong size' should be simple present 'I buy the wrong size' for habitual occurrences. Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + base verb, include appropriate particle 'on' for trying on clothes, and use simple present for habits.

× Mostly 600 Turkish liras but sometimes I'll catch discount and price getting lower.

✓ Mostly I spend around 600 Turkish liras, but sometimes I get a discount and the price gets lower.

Errors include missing subject, incorrect modal and verb forms. Use 'spend around' to indicate approximate amount. 'I'll catch discount' is unnatural — use 'I get a discount'. 'price getting lower' needs finite verb 'the price gets lower'. Suggestion: include subject, use present simple for habitual actions, and choose natural collocations like 'get a discount'.

× For example my last shoes getting price is 200 liver.

✓ For example, the price of my last shoes was 200 liras.

This sentence mixes forms and contains wrong vocabulary: 'getting price' is incorrect; use 'the price was' (past simple) because referring to a past purchase. 'liver' is a misspelling — correct form 'liras'. Suggestion: use 'the price of my last shoes was 200 liras' for clarity and correct past tense.

× Bought the perfect shoes, is comfortable and looking good.

✓ If I bought the perfect shoes, they would be comfortable and look good.

The original lacks subject and has wrong verb forms. 'Bought the perfect shoes' needs a clause connector (if) or a subject. 'is comfortable and looking good' mixes singular 'is' with missing subject and progressive 'looking' instead of simple 'look'. Suggestion: express hypothetical preference with conditional 'If I bought... they would be...'; ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel verb forms.