Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与句子简洁。开头先给出明确肯定或否定的主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持（频率、原因）。注意主谓一致（例如"shoes are"而不是"shoes is"），避免重复表达。

例: I don't buy shoes very often. As a student I can only afford a few pairs, so I usually buy shoes about twice a year because I prioritize comfort and durability.

提案: 回答要流畅并完整表达原因，避免语音犹豫和句子中断。给出具体原因并可提供例外或可能改变想法的条件，使用连接词如"because"或"so"使逻辑连贯。

例: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I'm not confident about the sizing. It's difficult to judge fit from photos, so I prefer trying shoes on in a store unless there is a reliable sizing guide and easy returns.

提案: 回答应先给出清晰的金额范围，并解释原因。注意用词正式些（避免口语俚语如"gonna"），改正语法错误并保持句子简洁。金额表达应放在句首或句中，后面补充消费标准。

例: I usually spend between ¥500 and ¥1000 on a pair of shoes. I don't focus on brand, but I will pay more for shoes that are comfortable and well made.

提案: 回答要更有条理并避免冗长重复。先直接给出偏好，然后用1–2个清晰原因支持。修正语法和用词（例如"joking"应为"playing"，"you're also not allowed us"应为"we are not allowed"），避免跑题。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes. As a student I often have PE classes and play during breaks, so I need practical footwear, and the school also restricts fashionable shoes to avoid competition among students.

× If the shoes is comfortable and have the high quality, I think it's OK.

✓ If the shoes are comfortable and of high quality, I think it's OK.

原句中主语“the shoes”为复数，但动词用单数“is”，且“have the high quality”搭配不当。应使用复数动词“are”，并用固定搭配“of high quality”表示“高质量”。建议注意主谓数一致，并使用常见的形容品质的短语。

× So perhaps I buy the shoes about twice a year.

✓ So perhaps I buy shoes about twice a year.

原句中“the shoes”不合上下文，泛指鞋子时应省略冠词或用复数“shoes”。动词时态（一般现在）用于表示习惯是正确的，无需改变。建议在泛指时不用“the”。

× No, I haven't, because I think it is. Not convenient because I don't know which size is, uh, suitable for me and I I need to change it.

✓ No, I haven't, because I think it's not convenient: I don't know which size is suitable for me and I might need to change them.

原句中分句结构断裂且“is. Not convenient”错误断句；还使用了不恰当的代词和数量。将否定放在形容词前形成完整句子，并用“might need to change them”表达可能需要换货，更符合情态动词用法和代词一致。建议用完整句子连接原因，并用情态动词表达可能性。

× If the shoes is comfortable and have the high quality I will buy it.

✓ If the shoes are comfortable and of high quality, I will buy them.

“the shoes”为复数，动词应为“are”，而“have the high quality”应改为“of high quality”。代词“it”应与复数“shoes”一致改为“them”。建议注意主谓一致及代词与先行词数的一致性。

× Won't be honest, I'm not gonna pay attention about that.

✓ To be honest, I'm not going to pay attention to that.

原句“Won't be honest”结构错误，可能想表达“To be honest”。此外，“gonna”为口语缩略，正式写作中用“going to”，并且介词搭配应为“pay attention to”。建议使用正确的短语“to be honest”和固定搭配“pay attention to”。

× Perhaps between the 500 to CN¥1000.

✓ Perhaps between ¥500 and ¥1000.

“between ... to ...”搭配错误，正确搭配为“between ... and ...”。货币符号放在数字前更自然，且不需要定冠词“the”。建议记住固定介词搭配“between...and...”并将货币符号置于数字之前。

× Oh, I prefer the comfortable shoes because as a student, I need to have the PE classes or joking in the playground.

✓ Oh, I prefer comfortable shoes because as a student, I need to have PE classes or jog in the playground.

原句“the comfortable shoes”在泛指时应去掉定冠词；“joking”用词错误，应为“jogging”或简化为“jog”。若使用动词需用不带冠词的复数名词“PE classes”。建议区分名词和动词形式并注意定冠词的使用。

× So I think the comfortable shoes it's necessary.

✓ So I think comfortable shoes are necessary.

“the comfortable shoes”在泛指时不应加定冠词；“it's necessary”与复数主语不一致，应为“are necessary”。建议保持主语与系动词在人称与数上的一致。

× So I think I don't have too much chances to wear the fashionable shoes and our.

✓ So I think I don't have many chances to wear fashionable shoes anymore.

原句语序混乱且词汇错误。“too much chances”应为“many chances”因为“chances”为可数名词；“the fashionable shoes”泛指时去掉定冠词；句尾“and our”不合语法，可能想说“anymore”。建议注意可数/不可数名词区分、正确词序并使用适当的副词表达否定延续（anymore）。

× You're also not allowed us to wear the fashionable shoes because it will cause the comparison between the each student.

✓ We are also not allowed to wear fashionable shoes because it will cause comparisons between students.

原句中“You're also not allowed us”结构错误，应为“we are not allowed”；“the comparison between the each student”中“the each student”错误，定冠词与每个( each)不可同时使用，应为“comparisons between students”。建议注意主语与被动结构的正确使用以及“each”与冠词的冲突。