Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够流畅。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，避免重复词汇，并尝试使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes once or twice a week because I love beautiful shoes that can match my outfits.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整。建议注意句子完整性，正确使用复数形式和冠词，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online once or twice a month because it is very convenient. I can choose from a variety of styles and colors, and the delivery is usually fast, taking only one or two days.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意比较级的正确使用，句子结构的完整性，以及表达经济能力时的准确用词。

例: I usually spend about CN¥500 on shoes because cheaper ones tend to be of poor quality, and shoes more expensive than CN¥500 are beyond my budget.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议注意冠词的使用，动词形式的正确性，以及句子结构的流畅性。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes over comfortable ones because I like to match my outfit with modern styles. Also, wearing fashionable shoes boosts my confidence and makes me feel happy throughout the day.

× Yes, I like buy shoes.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes.

动词like后面应接动名词形式buying，而不是动词原形buy。

× I love beautiful shoes and and it can, umm, suit my outfit.

✓ I love beautiful shoes and it can, umm, suit my outfit.

句中重复使用了连词and，应删除多余的一个。

× I often buy shoes online maybe once a month or twice a month, because I think it is very convenient and online shop.

✓ I often buy shoes online maybe once or twice a month, because I think it is very convenient to shop online.

短语online shop用法不当，应改为动词不定式to shop online，且once or twice a month更自然。

× I can choose a variety of style, colours and the deliveries faster.

✓ I can choose a variety of styles, colours, and the delivery is faster.

variety of后应接复数名词styles，deliveries应改为单数delivery，且需补充谓语is。

× Maybe one day or two day I can get my.

✓ Maybe in one or two days I can get my shoes.

表达时间时应使用复数days，且缺少宾语shoes。

× I usually spend approximately CN¥500 on shoes because I think the cheaper shoes will have a poor quality and expensive than CN¥500.

✓ I usually spend approximately CN¥500 on shoes because I think cheaper shoes will have poor quality and shoes more expensive than CN¥500.

the cheaper shoes应去掉定冠词the，poor quality前不加冠词，表达比较时应调整句子结构。

× I can't affordable so 500.

✓ I can't afford more than 500.

affordable是形容词，不能用作动词，正确用法是动词afford，且表达金额限制时应使用more than。

× I prefer fashionable shoes rather than comfortable shoes because I need to match my outfit with a fashionable and the modern style.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable shoes because I need to match my outfit with a fashionable and modern style.

prefer后接比较对象应使用prefer A to B，而不是rather than。

× Also, wear fashionable shoes will improve my confidence and make me feel happy all whole day.

✓ Also, wearing fashionable shoes will improve my confidence and make me feel happy all day.

动词后应使用动名词形式wearing，all whole day表达重复，应简化为all day。