Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“spoiled shoes”应为“sports shoes”，时间表达也不准确。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially sports shoes because I exercise regularly. I usually buy new ones every one or two years. My favorite brand is Answers because their shoes are high quality and stylish.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“the I try on shoes”重复且不通顺。建议简洁表达，注意句子结构和连贯性。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. Sometimes I try them on in physical stores first, then buy online because the prices are much cheaper than in shopping malls.

提案: 回答较好，但“UMM”口语填充词应避免，且句子可以更流畅。建议减少口语填充词，使用更自然的连接词。

例: I usually spend between 500 and 1000 Chinese Yuan on a pair of shoes. I prefer famous brands like Nike or Answers because they guarantee good quality, which is very important to me.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“wear wear”，语法错误“shoes is”应为“shoes are”。建议注意语法和避免重复。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I work long hours every day. Wearing comfortable shoes is very important to me; otherwise, my feet will hurt.

× I often buy sports shoes every one or two year

✓ I often buy sports shoes every one or two years

这里的“year”表示时间的复数，应使用复数形式“years”。

× my favorite brand is Answers because it has good quality and good looking

✓ my favorite brand is Answers because it has good quality and looks good

“good looking”是形容词短语，不能直接用作谓语，应改为动词短语“looks good”。

× Sometimes I try shoes in the I try on shoes in physical store and buy them online because the the price is much cheaper online than in shopping mall

✓ Sometimes I try on shoes in physical stores and buy them online because the price is much cheaper online than in shopping malls

句子结构混乱，重复“I try”，应简化为“try on shoes”；“physical store”应为复数“physical stores”；“the the price”重复，应去掉一个“the”；“shopping mall”应为复数“shopping malls”。

× Sometimes I try shoes in the I try on shoes in physical store and buy them online because the the price is much cheaper online than in shopping mall

✓ Sometimes I try on shoes in physical stores and buy them online because the price is much cheaper online than in shopping malls

“physical store”和“shopping mall”应使用复数形式，因为指的是一般的商店和商场。

× I usually spend 500 to CN¥1000 for a pair of shoes

✓ I usually spend CN¥500 to CN¥1000 for a pair of shoes

货币单位应放在数字前面，且应统一格式。

× since these brands can ensure the quality which are really important

✓ since these brands can ensure the quality which is really important

“quality”是不可数名词，单数形式，谓语动词应使用“is”。

× If the shoes is not comfortable, my feet will hurt

✓ If the shoes are not comfortable, my feet will hurt

“shoes”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× it is very important for me to wear wear comfortable shoes

✓ it is very important for me to wear comfortable shoes

“wear”重复，应去掉一个。