Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Have you ever bought Choice online?
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
You still very professionable shoes for a comfortable shoes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 10.0提案: Таны хариулт нь асуултыг давтан хэлсэн бөгөөд ямар ч утга агуулга байхгүй байна. Илүү тодорхой, шууд хариулж, өөрийн бодол, зуршлыг илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй.
例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every few months because I like to keep my footwear updated.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 5.0提案: Хариулт нь асуултыг буруу ойлгосон эсвэл буруу хэлсэн байна. Асуултад шууд хариулах, туршлагаа тодорхой тайлбарлах хэрэгтэй.
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is convenient and often offers a wider selection than physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 10.0提案: Хариулт нь асуултыг давтан хэлсэн бөгөөд ямар ч мэдээлэл өгөөгүй байна. Тодорхой дүнг хэлж, мөн яагаад тэр хэмжээний мөнгө зарцуулдаг талаар тайлбарлах хэрэгтэй.
例: I usually spend around $50 to $100 on a pair of shoes, depending on the brand and quality.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 15.0提案: Хариулт нь ойлгомжгүй, хэл зүйн алдаатай байна. Асуултад шууд хариулах, тодорхой ялгаа, шалтгаан, жишээ оруулах хэрэгтэй.
例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot during the day. However, I also like shoes that look fashionable, so I try to find a balance between the two.
文法
× Have you ever bought Choice online?
✓ Have you ever bought shoes online?
The student incorrectly used 'Choice' instead of 'shoes', which is the correct object related to the question. This is a pronoun/reference error. The word 'Choice' does not fit the context and confuses the meaning. The correction replaces 'Choice' with 'shoes' to match the question's topic.
× You still very professionable shoes for a comfortable shoes.
✓ You still prefer very professional shoes to comfortable shoes.
The sentence contains multiple errors: 'professionable' is not a correct adjective; the correct form is 'professional'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. The phrase 'You still very professionable shoes for a comfortable shoes' is ungrammatical. The correction changes the sentence to 'You still prefer very professional shoes to comfortable shoes,' which correctly uses the verb 'prefer' and the adjective 'professional', and the preposition 'to' for comparison. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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