Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and slightly expanded to sound more conversational. Try to avoid formal words like 'purchasing' in casual speech and add a bit more detail about how often you buy shoes to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I usually only get new ones when my old ones are worn out or I need a specific pair for an occasion.

提案: Your answer is good and includes reasons, but try to avoid repetition like 'a wide variety of choices to choose from' and filler words such as 'Yeah. So yeah'. Also, use linking words smoothly to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it's very convenient and offers a wide range of options, which makes it easier to find exactly what I want.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear words like 'thumbs' which might confuse the listener. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Clarify your points with better examples and smoother linking words.

例: It depends on the type of shoes. For instance, I usually spend less on casual sneakers, but if I buy designer or trendy shoes, they tend to be quite expensive.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain your preference and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: That's a tough question. I prefer a mix of both because I wear comfortable shoes for everyday use, but I choose fashionable ones for special occasions.

× Sometimes it can be cheap, for example when I buy sneakers or thumbs, they are just very cheap.

✓ Sometimes it can be cheap, for example when I buy sneakers or thongs, they are just very cheap.

The word 'thumbs' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'thongs' (a type of footwear). This is a vocabulary error related to plural nouns, so correcting the word to 'thongs' resolves the singular/plural issue and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Well, that's a tough question. It really depends I to be honest, I have a mix of both and I also rotate them when I depending on what kind of occasions are.

✓ Well, that's a tough question. It really depends. To be honest, I have a mix of both and I also rotate them depending on the kind of occasion.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors: 'It really depends I to be honest' is ungrammatical and confusing; it should be split into two sentences or clauses. Also, 'when I depending on what kind of occasions are' is incorrect; 'when I' is unnecessary and 'occasions are' is incomplete. The corrected sentence clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure by properly separating ideas and using correct verb forms.