Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“iPhone often go”应为“I often go”，以及句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用正确的时态和主谓一致。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because after quitting my job, I have more free time. I think it's important to use this time to improve myself, so I prepare for my PhD program there.

提案: 回答中动词形式错误较多，如“revise”应为“revising”，“searching”应为“search”。建议使用正确的动词形式，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually prepare for my PhD application by revising my research proposal, searching for potential supervisors, and sometimes looking for books that interest me.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，如“enjoy went”应为“enjoyed going”，且句子重复且不连贯。建议注意时态一致，简洁表达，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library when I was a kid. I often went there with my classmates to spend our vacations and finish summer assignments.

提案: 回答中有语气词“umm”“uh”影响流畅性，且语法错误较多，如“assignment stress”应为“assignment pressure”，“which is helpful to the subject”应为“which are helpful for their subjects”。建议减少语气词，注意语法和词汇搭配。

例: I think so because Chinese students face a lot of assignment pressure. Therefore, they should go to the library often to prepare for exams and find books that help with their subjects.

× Yes, iPhone often go to the library because you know, after I quitting my job, I do have some spare time.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because, you know, after quitting my job, I do have some spare time.

句中“iPhone”应为“I”，且“go”与主语“I”一致。去掉“after I quitting”中的“I”，改为“after quitting”，因为“after”后接动名词。

× after I quitting my job

✓ after quitting my job

介词“after”后应接动名词形式，不能接主语加动词ing形式。

× So I think it's important for me to go some work and improve myself such as library for me to prepare for my PhD program.

✓ So I think it's important for me to do some work and improve myself, such as going to the library to prepare for my PhD program.

“go some work”表达错误，应为“do some work”；“such as library”应改为“such as going to the library”，动词形式需正确。

× such as library for me to prepare for my PhD program.

✓ such as going to the library to prepare for my PhD program.

“such as”后应接名词或动名词短语，不能直接接名词“library”。

× I usually prepare for my PhD program applying, such as revise my research proposal, searching for the supervisors and sometimes I also searching for books I'm interested in.

✓ I usually prepare for my PhD program application, such as revising my research proposal, searching for supervisors, and sometimes I also search for books I'm interested in.

“applying”应改为名词“application”；“revise”应改为动名词“revising”；“searching”应改为动词原形“search”与“also”搭配。

× such as revise my research proposal, searching for the supervisors

✓ such as revising my research proposal, searching for supervisors

“such as”后应接动名词形式，保持形式一致。

× sometimes I also searching for books I'm interested in.

✓ sometimes I also search for books I'm interested in.

“also”后应接动词原形，不能用现在分词。

× Yes, I really enjoy went to the library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library when I was a kid.

“enjoy”后应接动名词“going”，且时态应为过去时“enjoyed”。

× I often go to library with my classmates where where I can we can spend our vacation, finish our summer assignments in the library.

✓ I often went to the library with my classmates where we could spend our vacation and finish our summer assignments in the library.

“go to library”应为“go to the library”；时态应与“was a kid”一致，改为过去时“went”；“can we can”重复，应删去一个，且时态改为过去时“could”。

× I often go to library with my classmates

✓ I often go to the library with my classmates

“library”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指。

× there are so many assignment stress, so uh students should go to the libraries as often as they want because they they can prepare the exams in the library and find some books which is helpful to the subject.

✓ There is so much assignment stress, so students should go to the library as often as they want because they can prepare for exams in the library and find some books which are helpful to the subjects.

“assignment stress”是不可数名词，应用“much”而非“many”；“libraries”改为单数“library”保持一致；“prepare the exams”应为“prepare for exams”；“which is helpful to the subject”应改为复数“which are helpful to the subjects”。

× there are so many assignment stress

✓ there is so much assignment stress

“assignment stress”是不可数名词，不能用“many”，应使用“much”。

× go to the libraries as often as they want

✓ go to the library as often as they want

此处指一般去图书馆，使用单数定冠词“the library”更合适。

× prepare the exams in the library

✓ prepare for exams in the library

动词“prepare”后应接介词“for”，表示“为考试做准备”。

× find some books which is helpful to the subject

✓ find some books which are helpful to the subjects

“books”是复数，谓语动词应为复数“are”；“subject”应为复数“subjects”，与“books”对应。