Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, I often go to the library and that's why. That's because I love reading a lot. I love reading actually stories and short novels. So that's why I love going to the library a lot.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
And the library, there are a lot of activities to do, but the main reason, the main purpose when you go to the library is to read. So when I go to the library, I always read and search about a new book, search about new novels maybe sometimes. So actually I read a lot in the library. Sometimes I prefer to study also in the library. So it helps me a lot.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, when I was kissed, I used to go to the library a lot with my father and with my family. They helped me to to improve my writing skills and reading skills. So they always take me to the library with them.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, they always prefer to make their kids like improve their knowledge and every aspect of life. So they prefer their kids to go to the library.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and redundant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.
例: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading stories and short novels. It is a quiet place where I can enjoy my books without distractions.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 70.0提案: Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about your activities in the library.
例: In the library, I usually read books and look for new novels to enjoy. Additionally, I sometimes study there because the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 60.0提案: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice (e.g., 'kissed' should be 'kid'). Use clear topic sentences and add specific details with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.
例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father and family. They encouraged me to improve my reading and writing skills by spending time there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 55.0提案: Make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding awkward phrasing. Use linking words to explain reasons and provide specific details.
例: Yes, Chinese parents often encourage their children to visit the library because they want them to improve their knowledge and develop in many areas of life.
文法
× Yes, when I was kissed, I used to go to the library a lot with my father and with my family.
✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I used to go to the library a lot with my father and with my family.
The word 'kissed' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'kid' to refer to a child. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense error, but it affects the past tense context of the sentence. The phrase 'when I was a kid' correctly sets the past time frame for the action.
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