Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý sử dụng số nhiều cho danh từ đếm được (facilities thay vì facility) và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu để giải thích lý do bạn thích thư viện để làm câu trả lời thêm phong phú.

例: Yes, my university has a big library with modern facilities, so I really like going there. I usually visit the library about three times a week because it provides a quiet environment that helps me focus on my studies.

提案: Bạn trả lời rất tốt với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'usually'.

例: I usually go to the library to work on my homework or complete office tasks because it's a quiet place that helps me concentrate. Moreover, I sometimes meet my friends there to collaborate on group projects, which makes studying more effective and enjoyable.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'when I was kids' nên là 'when I was a kid' và 'if I had had a change' nên là 'if I had had a chance'. Bạn cũng nên dùng số nhiều cho danh từ đếm được (books). Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì và danh từ chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house. However, if I had had a chance, I would have enjoyed reading fairy tales, books, or comics there because at that age I mostly preferred playing outside rather than studying indoors.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời trung thực và có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'at the early age' nên là 'at an early age' và 'outside activity' nên là 'outdoor activities'. Bạn nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: That's a difficult question for me because I'm Vietnamese and don't know much about Chinese culture. However, if I had to guess, I would say that Chinese kids might not often go to the library because, like children in my country, they usually prefer outdoor activities to indoor ones such as reading in a library.

× Yes, my university has a big library with modern facility, so I really like to go to the library at my campus.

✓ Yes, my university has a big library with modern facilities, so I really like to go to the library on my campus.

The word 'facility' should be plural 'facilities' because it refers to multiple features or amenities in the library. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'on' when referring to a campus location.

× Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was kids because there was no library near my house.

✓ Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house.

The phrase 'when I was kids' is incorrect because 'kids' is plural but the subject is singular 'I'. It should be 'when I was a kid'.

× However, if I had had a change, I would have enjoyed reading fairy tales, book or comics at the library because at this age I mostly prefer playing outside rather than studying indoors.

✓ However, if I had had a chance, I would have enjoyed reading fairy tales, books, or comics at the library because at that age I mostly preferred playing outside rather than studying indoors.

The word 'change' is incorrect; it should be 'chance'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the plural 'fairy tales' and 'comics'. Additionally, 'at this age' should be 'at that age' to refer to the past, and 'prefer' should be 'preferred' to maintain past tense consistency.